|Reviews for Ordinary Chocolate|
| alannah chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
i love charlie and the chocolate factory wish i ahd the movie
| DarkMousyRulezAll chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
This is a GREAT story You capture the characters and the wild fun imagination of the whole place very well
I love the idea of the Ordinary Chocolate :D Very creative, and also kinda obvious but that's what made it creative XD
Excellent excellent work I was simply captivated.
Now is this a one-shot? *checks back up to see* yes it is. Ah well. I'll be looking forward to more awesome stuff :D
| dionne dance chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
I loved this story - the way the factory responds to Willie is amazing!
| Serendipity's tears chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
When Oliver Twist asked for more, it echoed my thoughts on this perfictly! :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
"It baffled him, but he rather enjoyed being baffled - it was one of his favorite pastimes, right up there with baffling others." Love this bit.
| Turrislucidus chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Ordinary Chocolate is brilliant and so is this magical story! Wow.