Reviews for Trickled Thoughts
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
I like it please do more
HikariGaijin chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
Rather interesting. Chrono in love, sure it's understandable for a first attempt, but I wish there was a bit of dialogue in this. It's just a long monologue-like work where we only see one point of view. I don't mean to say I don't understand your choice of narrative speaking, it's just that we focus too much on the boy's inner thoughts. There's not enough outside interaction to really get a strong feel for this.
FadingNoctis chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Awww, this one is cute. Especially the underwater scene. -

If you want criticism, you won't get much from me. The only error I saw was a minor typo ("I laid my clothes out to try on various rocks"; "try" should be "dry" in this sentence).

I know this is a oneshot, but I hope you continue to write Chrno Crusade fanfiction. It seems you have a knack for it. -
Raychaell Dionzeros chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
So beautiful! I love this!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
It was a simple and nice one shot. I bet a look of people are curious about what Chrono thinks when he spents a day with Rosette and Azmaria.