Reviews for Nothing So Simple
Mystical Authoress chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
...This is amazing. Short, but good. I love the dialogue between Cain and Riff, you really kept them in character. But...just to let you, with 'falling' characters...I think you meant, 'following' characters in your author note (I'm sorry, it's a habit of mine to point out these sort of mistakes). This fic takes place after the story 'Lion Emblem,' right? Anyway, great job.