Reviews for It started on a rainy day
Guest chapter 2 . 1/22
i love this so much pls come back haha
Guest chapter 2 . 1/11
MY OTP . THERE SO CUTE I LOVE THEM
magic135 chapter 2 . 1/5
glad to have you back, hope for new chapters yet to come.
Edward M. Keller chapter 2 . 1/3
Finally! A good RitoxYui!
WhiteBeaner chapter 2 . 1/3
Oh my god it's been sooooooo long! But I'm glad you're back because this is one of my favorite Rito/Yui stories of all time. Keep up the good work!
DontKnowD0ntCare chapter 2 . 1/2
Not gonna lie, was gonna write something kind of similar to this xD.

Either way you've earned my praise . Can't wait to see what you'll come up with next.
26Frenchguy chapter 2 . 1/2
Very interesting, I wait for the continuation.
Cyberweasel89 chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
VERY good. I love seeing Rito x Yui from her perspective. Any plans to continue?
azmi.noor.58 chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
Continue it already please, i really wanna see what happen next!
Souma Aquifina -Yulli K. Liam chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Good. More please.
Hibikijr chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
The thought had actually crossed my mind at the time
magic135 chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
great. more chapters soon i hope
Fireboy19795 chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
I like it. If you plan more chapters, try and put them on a date, and make her comfortable with things she likes, such as cats. Then, if you're into writing like this, a night of passion.
alantyler8 chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
It's a little dry, I suggest adding an unexpected circumstance that draws in the reader. The last sentence needs to be revised. You have talent in writing, keep improving!
Julius Slash chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
I really liked your story and your pairing. Your way of writing is good but you need to keep an eye on your grammar. Take some time reading it over and it'll become even better. I await your next chapter.

Thanks for your hard work and good luck
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