Reviews for Dual: Parallel Trouble Adventure A Special Day
Crouching Tiger Hidden Shizuru chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
The endingspoilt the story for me abit. Could use some more dialouge and it wasn't all that funny.

Overall - C
kakish moters chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
it was halareuse but it could use some more diologe
Jts016 chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
Good story, you expressed it well, but you need to break up the paragraphs a little. Interesting ending, but it seemed rushed. But you got the point across.

Rating: 7 out of 10
Stoked chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
It was decent enough. The ending seemed extremely rush and didn't appear work well with the story. Also the formatting needs to be worked on. Every spoked sentence should have its own line, as it makes reading much easier.

Overall : C
COHugh chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
I remember reading this on the Dualfans site. Nice piece... Keep up the good work!
Jaide DM chapter 1 . 8/6/2003
Very nice. It reminds me quite a bit of the Dual! style of characters, and I am quite impressed. All around good work. And speaking of another review, yes, D did become human when the dimensions mixed. But I am pretty sure this story was not written to take place at those times. There is no Earth Defense Force in the after world.
Linkgirl1 chapter 1 . 5/14/2003
LOL! Cool story. I really like it! _
Stoked chapter 1 . 4/21/2003
After the switch to the combined world, D becomes fully emotional.
Gabriel Syme chapter 1 . 11/16/2002
Yes ! A dual! story ! This is the only one around here, so far ! Hope to see more !