|Reviews for Mistakes|
| Tsukiko K chapter 2 . 2/14
The ANs are too long and take up most of the story and not a lot happens.
| Tsukiko K chapter 10 . 2/14
The chapters are too short
| NaruShika-Forever chapter 23 . 11/23/2014
... I'm getting confused...
| Guest chapter 23 . 11/19/2014
Wow very much yullen...
| Guest chapter 11 . 11/19/2014
It's not YULLEN if it's actually tyllen
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/19/2014
I hope this isn't rapey and that Tyki keeps his disgusting face away from Allen. If not, THEN ITS NOT YULLEN AT ALL OKAY
| Silent Death Walker chapter 23 . 11/12/2014
wow...damn road you smart lol
| Panda Master X chapter 23 . 11/9/2014
uwaaahh! So much is happening! Guuuh, I don't know who to root foooorrr! (TTOTT)
| Panda Master X chapter 22 . 8/31/2014
GAH! Can't believe I didn't see that before! You got me there, hahaha. Hope you can resolve your family issues soon! Good luck, and thanks for even updating at all! xD
| BlackNights24 chapter 22 . 8/31/2014
It is a good story, but I do wish the chapters were than that, it is good.
| Silent Death Walker chapter 21 . 7/17/2014
I think its allen
| suki kuran chapter 21 . 7/10/2014
Awesome sauce -thumbs up- nice work on the story I can't wait for more
| jazz91121 chapter 21 . 7/6/2014
| Panda Master X chapter 21 . 7/6/2014
Ohh, I'm pretty sure it's Kanda, even though little hints are telling me its Allen. Hahaha, lol. Watch me get it all wrong and its Lavi. XD hahahaha!
| Guest chapter 21 . 7/5/2014
It's obviously Allen's pov!