Reviews for Mistakes
Tsukiko K chapter 2 . 2/14/2016
The ANs are too long and take up most of the story and not a lot happens.
Tsukiko K chapter 10 . 2/14/2016
The chapters are too short
NaruShika-Forever chapter 23 . 11/23/2014
... I'm getting confused...
Guest chapter 23 . 11/19/2014
Wow very much yullen...
Guest chapter 11 . 11/19/2014
It's not YULLEN if it's actually tyllen
Guest chapter 5 . 11/19/2014
I hope this isn't rapey and that Tyki keeps his disgusting face away from Allen. If not, THEN ITS NOT YULLEN AT ALL OKAY
Silent Death Walker chapter 23 . 11/12/2014
wow...damn road you smart lol
Panda Master X chapter 23 . 11/9/2014
uwaaahh! So much is happening! Guuuh, I don't know who to root foooorrr! (TTOTT)
Panda Master X chapter 22 . 8/31/2014
GAH! Can't believe I didn't see that before! You got me there, hahaha. Hope you can resolve your family issues soon! Good luck, and thanks for even updating at all! xD
BlackNights24 chapter 22 . 8/31/2014
It is a good story, but I do wish the chapters were than that, it is good.
Silent Death Walker chapter 21 . 7/17/2014
I think its allen
suki kuran chapter 21 . 7/10/2014
Awesome sauce -thumbs up- nice work on the story I can't wait for more
Suki-chan out
jazz91121 chapter 21 . 7/6/2014
Panda Master X chapter 21 . 7/6/2014
Ohh, I'm pretty sure it's Kanda, even though little hints are telling me its Allen. Hahaha, lol. Watch me get it all wrong and its Lavi. XD hahahaha!
Guest chapter 21 . 7/5/2014
It's obviously Allen's pov!
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