|Reviews for A Token of Affection|
| mentalfictions chapter 9 . 11/25
I'm dying on the inside reading the last bit of this chapter... Please, please, please don't leave me hanging!
| Cheshire's ColdEyes chapter 9 . 11/23
WHHHHHHHHAAAAAAATTTT?! Okay I have been following this story and it is one of my favorites because you write them in character! I love that! I love how it isn't quick paced it is just the right pacing. Your twist and turns are awesome and happen in a smooth natural way. You are doing a fantastic job! Now on to this chapter... "WHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTT?! I was not expecting this turn! And you left it at a cliffhanger! I'm just like wait what?! Did she just die?! HOW could she have died, just like that?! What is going to happen now?!" I enjoy your story very much I can't wait for you next update keep up the fantastic work! :D I wish you luck on your novel. I also have a similar problem I have all these different stories floating in my head but I can't seem to just write the damn thing. I have written 6 chapters of one only to find out that I no longer like how I wrote it. The second story only has one page to it's name. XD So trust me I know the struggle. It is hard to do but keep on going even if it seems like your not getting anywhere you are. :)
| AnnitaNeko-Chan chapter 9 . 11/8
Ok wow... What treasure have I stumbled upon? This fanfic is AWESOME! Really now! I love how yako has developed through the years how she is not acting like a puppy to Neuro, how she sets her priorities and what she wants from Neuro... Stcinobdtjirxbi it's perfect! I can't even start explaining all the aspects of this work that leads to perfection! The smallest details, character development and the messages that come forward... Ugh I'm dying! *hearts all over the place*
You are awesome, have luck with your first novel but don't drop this story! But after how you ended it... *glares while suffocating in drama* I can't help but looking forward to Neuro's reactions and thoughts as well as some explanations of what the hell happened XD. (also I love neuro's playful attitude and irony in your story... Mew mew ~~~~)
Well, I tried to point out /a tiny/ bit of my thoughts of about this piece of work! You are great and keep it up!
Take care and see you around~
| Antina2000 chapter 9 . 11/3
?! Please please please! This cliffhanger!
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/2
The latest chapter was immensely good! That cliffhanger though uuaaaagh. D:
I wish you luck in writing your novel!
| Neemarishima chapter 9 . 10/20
What a cliffhanger! Everything was so in a good mood when suddenly... Please tell me, she wasn't die yet! Even Neuro didn't know what wass all that about. He was so cute, thinking over the obvious thing like that too much, but i can't imagine what will he do after he sees his human... AAARG please tell me you will update soon! I'll wait! Keep writing!
| xXxblacklilyxXx chapter 9 . 10/19
OH. MY. GOD. YOU DID NOT JUST LEAVR US WITH THAT CLIFFHANGER. FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU************
(P.S. I knew there was something familiar about that tango! Good luck with the novel too!)
| merve chapter 9 . 10/13
oh my god, ı couldnt believe what ı have read! how cruel! ı never thought ı would say those words, but poor neuro.. the poor demon had to watch as someone shoot yako infront of his eyes :/ :(
| Cian Keita chapter 9 . 10/12
Cruel, so cruel.
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/9
Where can I throw money to get the next chapter ASAP? Seriously, what a cliffhanger!
This story is great, NeuYako is great, you are great. OMG!
*cough* Sorry I was in the heat of the moment.
Please take your time to write another amazing chapter to follow this one! Have a nice day! :)
| Failisse chapter 9 . 10/8
No! Fuck no! Yako CAN'T die! That's bullshit! Oh gods, what's going to happen now? How the hell is Neuro going to be able to get over this? He's going to go on a murdering rampage, I just know it! And I honestly can't blame him. I would want to tear apart that miserable mother ducker who murdered Yako too. I can only imagine the massacre that Neuro will make of it. But who the hell has that kind of stealth that even NEURO wasn't able to track it? I wonder is Neuro will do the Hercules thing and bring Yako back from this realm's version of Hades (the human land of the dead, not the god). Also, it's rather curious you mentioned the Grim Reaper in this chapter, and hinted that the culprit of the "seed" seemed inhuman. I am now seriously pondering that. Either way, what a cliffhanger! That is just MEAN to leave it there. I badly hope for another update soon, because my mind won't be able to rest until I know what happens next. So please, PLEASE update! I promise chocolate chip cookies will be in it for you.
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/7
Ahhh! What a cliffhanger! I can't wait to read what happens next. It's been a while since I've last read this fic and I'm glad to see Yako and Neuro's relationship progressing. There may be hope for that puzzle eating bird brain yet!
P.s. I immediately thought of Garrus and Fem!Shep during the tango scene XD Bless you for throwing that in there!
| watergoddesskasey chapter 9 . 10/7
| Neemarishima chapter 1 . 10/7
I'm on this series now! on my way to read the rest of it, but i think i'll read it after i finished reading some chapters from this manga. i'm afraid i won't get a little explanation just like on "anatomy of affection" where i hadn't finished sicks and new bloodline arc. but surely, this will be my favorite mtnn fic! keep writing, author-san!
| Panakeia chapter 9 . 10/5
I swear I had to read that last part twice for getting sure you meant what you meant. This is an awesome cliffhanger, but it seems we'll be hanging for a while. Good luck with your personal project. Are you intending to post it somewhere or to take it to an editorial, because I would love to read it