|Reviews for The time I protect you|
| HappyGirl345 chapter 22 . 2/19/2013
Im really going 2 miss waiting 4 each chapter but like u said its the beginning of everything
| Katy-Joanne209 chapter 22 . 2/16/2013
Too lazy to open my acc. WHY YOUUUUUUUU! YOU MADE ME CRYYYYYY! MY EYES WERE ALL RED! AND EVEN MY NOSE IS RED! sequel? xD hihi! :"3 SOO much fun!
| Elsa Laufeyson chapter 22 . 2/14/2013
(sighs) finally! I thought Jin was gonna die in this chapter -_-...
| Guest chapter 21 . 2/11/2013
one of the best fanfics i've ever read :D
| sakuraclyne chapter 21 . 2/11/2013
omg i must know what happen next and i hope you didn't kill off jin xiao need him DX
| Elsa Laufeyson chapter 21 . 2/9/2013
Nooo!This can't be!
Jin!Don't leave Xiao alone! she needs you!
| Kaneshiro-Sama chapter 21 . 2/9/2013
Heihachi: YES! My bastard grandson is dead! Now the Zaibatsu is ultimately mine! Now, let me in so I can punish this author for not including me in this story!
Takeshi: Oh be quiet, you old fart! I didn't come here for your crappy ramblings anyway!
Heihachi: Oh shut up, you degenerate! *slams him with Rajin's Wrath*
Takeshi: *floored* Oh...god...damn...you...wrinkly...old...motherf...*falls unconscious*
Excusing these two for the moment! Your story is picking up some awesomeness! I'm really proud of you for actually coming this far! Even I as an author could never go as far as you did so well done to you! As a Jin player however, I'm not terribly happy he's gonna die, but hey! It's your story! Anyways, upload your final chapter ASAP if you've already done it! It's gonna be epic!
I have some faults with the overall story though. Well one fault actually. WHERE IS HEIHACHI?! THE OLD MAN BADASS HIMSELF WHO IS CRUCIAL TO THE PLOT AND YOU DIDN'T PUT HIM IN?! BLASPHEMY! But that's just me wanting more badass stuff and less lovey, so don't listen to me too much.
P.S: I was wondering if Takeshi the Death God (My flagship Anti Hero and Tekken OC) could make a cameo appearance in the sequel. You don't have to if you don't want to. It's just a suggestion.
P.S.S: I have an idea of a Tekken fanfic I'd like to share with you after I finish my Dead or Alive fanfic! I hope it'll be appealing to you!
Best of luck with the the conclusion! ;)
| Duchess K chapter 21 . 2/8/2013
WHY U KILL JIN!? O.o NOOOOOO! JINNYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YY! T_T
| HappyGirl345 chapter 21 . 2/8/2013
This chapter was amazing cant wait 4 the last one!
| alwaysdoubted chapter 20 . 1/24/2013
Once again Kazuya got to him
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/19/2013
i really wana know what going tgo happen in the end
| Kaneshiro-Sama chapter 10 . 1/8/2013
This is a tense chapter you've whipped up there. Nice stuff! Not too descriptive, but the pace keeps flowing so nice job!
One thing though. About Yua's weapon. Isn't the proper name for that weapon a Katana? Why did you name it a Samurai? I'm quite curious. Although I have a theory on why you called it this. Since Samurai is a derived from the word Samurao (meaning "to serve") doesn't that mean that that sword is named that because it serves Yua or perhaps it's named that because she expects loyalty from the PIC soilders. Am I missing something? I'm just thinking too much here.
And about Yua. I don't really see her as a badass as much as your other readers do. To me, I see her as an archetype hero (WHICH IS NOT A BAD THING!). She is an interesting and well developed character, but to be a badass (or BOSS in this case) a character needs to have some humour something Yua kind of lacks although considering her past, I wouldn't blame her.
P.S: Uhh, Will? Linkara called. He'd like his line back.
P.S.S: Keep up the good work! Can't wait until the final chapter of this already amazing (AND LONG!) clash of epicness! :D
| Duchess K chapter 19 . 1/5/2013
omigosh! Please continue! And what is the devil gene project thingy?
| alwaysdoubted chapter 19 . 1/4/2013
| Kaneshiro-Sama chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
I'll put it bluntly...
I love this story! No really. I think it's one of the best stories of Tekken I've read in a long while! It's a great premise for an anime and I really hope it is one (some people say this about my DOA fanfic as well)! It's well written, has a good plot and has some well developed characters too! I have read this story but I never had the chance of reviewing it properly so I hope this review is compromise enough!
P.S: My sincerest thank you's for turning Jin into a badass good guy I have known from the beginning! As a Jin player myself I'm forever grateful you've done this so well done to you!