Reviews for Rebirth of a Hero |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oof. The thousand years of death katsu style. Any person would flinch in phantom pain. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can u update this telling us where to find the new version if it gets adopted |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your story and I really appreciate the way you made this story and I really appreciate the laughs I get from this story, I can't wait till chapter 25 and when this story is complete, I'd keep reading it over and over again so keep up the good work ALL HAIL INSANITY! ALL HAIL THE LOG! ALL HAIL THE BAT SHIT INSANITY! ALL HAIL CHAOS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() God I love this beautiful masterpiece you've written, I love the story, the plot, the insane shit that makes sense in each chapter, love the idea of digimon and digimon characters being the naruto characters in reincarnation form, and I love everything about this story, can't wait till the next chapter and the other chapters in the future, it's all really amazing and i love reading this story from beginning to the break point, keep up the good work and i look forward to reading the next chapter. ALL HAIL CHAOS, ALL HAIL THE LOG, ALL HAILL THE BEAUTY OF INSANITY. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you sont like a character, in this case Hinata I dont get why you would write it that Naruto married her then. The dislike for her is obvious and weirdly shone. To have him married, have several kids and come to be with him again but have him blow her off and her accept it with ease as he pursues a 13 year old. Then have both acting like they are just acquaintances and having no issue when they next meet. Followed by him saying he never really loved her and only settled for her and had several kids with her because Sakura was taken and picked someone else? That's some fucked up shit and a pointless and tasteless thing to write. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So... if I'm understanding right. Jeri who he has been trying to break out if her "shell" as he could tell she's hiding her true self and in pain but doesnt know why is Hinata. His wife who he had several kids with and was happily married to as was said. She died 3 years after him and sought him out to be by his side again in a new life. Yet if I'm not mistaken when she tells him he basically blows her off and tells her to make a new life in this one and they'll be friends as he goes to pursue a 13 year old girl he just met instead. I really hope I'm misunderstanding this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad at all. I do believe though that he originally spent 10 hours which equaled to 2 in that space. Then by mistake the 10 was forgotten and divided again into only 24 minutes. |
![]() ![]() "Naruto is only 12 years old, with the reserves he had at his death at 52 years old, meaning beyond Kage Level." In other words might as well be infinite since he had chakra comparable to the first hokage in his base no kurama no sage mode and especially no six paths mode when he was 16 it's relearning control morals dealing with various hacks and teaching others are the only things slowing him down |
![]() ![]() What a corny story reincarnation ? But remembers his past life and chakra? Takato and naruto are different. Naruto as takato should not remember about chakra and your story is corny sucks |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you ever come back to this story , you should just remake it. The Tamers adaptation will just need some plot hole fixes , but the 02 part will need TOTAL REWRITE. too many things let out to normal people by Naruto. Things a Naruto that was Hokage won't let out. I get your thing with insanity , but the 02 part was just OUT OF CONTROL. |
![]() ![]() plz update this fic its too good to let die |
![]() ![]() Hollywood undead is one of the best bands ever in my opinion it's cool to see someone use something in their fic that I would recognize. |
![]() ![]() This story isn't good at all, because Your writing style is really soulless And Naruto talks too much The story itself is soulless Oh! And did i mention that Naruto talks too much? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was an enjoyable read |
![]() ![]() ![]() its official, Itachi is now the lord of pranks |