Reviews for Next to You
cethmistmyk chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
interesting! while I loved seeing sherlock's point of view, there were a few places where it looked like you literally copied and pasted from your other work (and that work had a few spots too) I don't mind reading about the same scene, but reading the same words gets boring. sherlock notices different things from john, (or snape or Harry) and so that should be reflected in what they think.
biblioholic chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
A confusing story. It isn't coherent how the story is really related to Harry Potter. Are Harry and Severus people who share a flat across from Sherlock and John or are they Sherlock and John themselves.

I think it would've been better if you just left all the names as Sherlock and John (without the confusing last bit where all the names are all jumbled up) and simply filed it away as another Sherlock fic (not a crossover).

Decent writing though and the lyrics were a nice touch that matched with some parts of the story.

Rate 6.7/10