|Reviews for Not Too Wisely, But Too Well|
| nette0602 chapter 4 . 7/6/2013
| JustCallMeWhatever chapter 4 . 6/27/2013
I like this a lot. :)
There are not many Rusty/OC fics on this website.
I look forward to the next chapter! :)
| ILuvOdie chapter 3 . 2/10/2013
interesting story so far :] i want to read more. Please update soon _
| DoomKnight1of24 chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
So far, so good...
In my opinion, you did a good job in recapturing the movies flair, right from the start. I did spot some grammatical oversights here and there, but that is to be expected. This is , after all...
On a side note, you stayed very true to the source material. That is not necessarily important to myself, but I could imagine that some readers appreciate it.
I think you took a heavy risk making your OC a female, especially such an... emancipated one. Let's face it, throwing a girl into a group of guys, especially a group of boys who are all such big characters? It changes the whole group's dynamic. Things could turn awkward very easily, if you ask me.
But that is just what I think. And it's not as if this isn't a good story. The beginning is great. The character's are spot-on. You brought your own little twist into the whole thing, and should you actually complete this thing, it's going to be interesting to see how it'll turn out.
| dots-fiction chapter 3 . 9/22/2012
i like it so far but i want mooore!
| InsertCoolName chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Hello! I love this story! Please please update soon!