Reviews for Goblins, Wizards, and Mob Bosses
wtchcool chapter 12 . 9/22/2012
Job well done.

Quibbles: 1. "who truly excepted you just as", that should be "who truly accepted you..." 2. "in each other embrace", I believe that should be "in each other's embrace"
wtchcool chapter 5 . 9/21/2012
Well, since you asked: 1. You said "Where they always that dark?" when it should be "Were they always that dark?" 2. You use the term "suit" rather than "suite". 3. You wrote "He was all these things a more." That should be "and more."

Overall, enjoying the story.
Ziggelly chapter 9 . 9/10/2012
I'm liking this a lot. And I love how quickly you update. Kudos. ;D
Somebody chapter 4 . 8/29/2012
Wow, this is pretty awesome. Your first chapter was a little weak, imho, but I'm glad that I stuck with this story, because your writing seems to be getting better and better with each chapter. Colour me impressed. Keep this up!
The Turn Coat chapter 2 . 8/28/2012
This story's interesting so far. Are you planning to have more of the story in the past, showing what the two did after Harry left or will you jump ahead in time where John and Harry cross paths again? Look forward to seeing what happens. Thanks for writing :)