|Reviews for Zoro's Decision|
| animechick57 chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
AWE the ending was so cute X3
when sanji talk about nami him i wanted to barf some reason XD
| Aryan chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
| Queen Marimo chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
"And let me go for about a week without sex after this."
XD haha my fav lines..awsome fic * A * b i'm glad zoro still picked sanji
| Druekee chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Oh my god this was great!
Details I enjoyed:
-Multiple orgasms! I've read far too many erotic fanfics where they cum once and then theyre totally down for the count, which isn't realistic! (although i have to add that men that are as aroused as zoro was usually don't LOSE their boner and then have it come back up when faced with stimulating sensations- they typically have a constant boner that faces many orgasms before growing limp)
-Luffy's rubber body being basically a glorified sex toy. Fantastic. There are so many creative ways to incorporate his devil fruit powers with sex and I was rather entertained by the unique way you described his actions.
-The remarkably realistic way of describing how Zoro lost control near the end of their little fun time. It gets old hearing the same old stuff over and over, so actually reading a realistic orgasm is refreshing.
-Luffy's bluntness at the beginning. It's challenging to write porn for characters that don't have any canon sex scenes (or any romance scenes for that matter haha) but that seemed pretty close to what i believe he would say if put in the situation.
As another side note in case you write another sex scene- it's obscenely hard to screw somebody in the position you mentioned Luffy being in (towards the end) while wearing pants. They would most likely slip and fall down to his knees ending up in a jumbled mess. Porn is hard to write! You have to pay attention to every little detail and reread the scenes to make sure the positions and such match up.
I nitpicked a little bit with the porn scenes, and the plot that surrounds them is a completely different ball park haha. A ball park that I don't feel like getting into right now because I feel like it was mostly just created as a holder and a starter for the porn and not worth going crazy about.
Good luck with your writing and I hope that you will improve greatly in 2013 :)
| Wild Rhov chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Awww, is this part of "The Accident." If so, I am REALLY glad you separated it. I would have been sad if this event happened in that universe. It just seems petty. HAWT...but petty. I happen to love threesomes, but picking between an established relationship and a new love...no fun. Poor Zoro. Luffy totally could learn to attend him better with time, but I'm glad he stayed loyal to Sanji. And at least Zoro has a fall-back plan, haha! Oh, and those last two lines KILLED me. XD Awesome story, and good all having it separate from the main story!
| X.summergrey.X chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
i'm not a fan of this three-some, it was good just personally not a fan of zoroXluffy. now i know that. but i'm really glad he picked sanji. i hope you know i'm not saying this was bad becuase it wasnt. if i was a fan, then i be like this was amazing. i might be rambling now but i really hope you get what i mean. i dont like sounding rude or mean.
| hedgehog3000 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
The last two sentences made me laugh XD
Very nice and hot fanfic! I loved it!
| Blargheydarghey chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Aw. This was cute. I wasn't sure about it because I have issues with the Zoro x Luffy vs Zoro x Sanji thing (ZoSan is my OTP but I ship ZoLu occasionally and seeing them put against each other hurts my heart XD) and I was worried about how it would turn out... not just him choosing Luffy, but also how Luffy would react if he chose Sanji and I was just worried it would get really sad one way or the other xD. But I love how you handled it- both that he chose Sanji and I thought Luffy's reaction was very realistic.
But most of all, the ending was adorable.
| RedSnow4 chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Jeez, so hot and steamy! I love how you make Luffy not so innocent, like most people do. I do support both parings, bit I couldn't lie when I tell you I was happy that he chose sanji. I love ZoroXSanji more;)
| FujoshiQueen chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
haha! Nice one! I had a good laugh while reading this!
| WhiteCourtain chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Oh so you decided to take this seperately after all? This is a rare pairing and you write the hottest smuts ever hands down omg awesome.
| LazyAuthoress chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
God! This was kind of random! But soooooooo sexy!
Perverted minds will never change I guess :P
| zosanlover chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
im confused...did you just seperate this from 'the accident ' and made into a seperate story? cause im ok with that. i'd like it better as a seperate story instead of part of 'the accident'. itd make more sense.:)
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Yuuuuummmmmyyyyy lemonyyy gooooooddddddnesss