Reviews for Third Time's The Charm
Miesai chapter 1 . 9/11
It was really sweet how amazing you could write Lucys emotions espacelly couse your'e an boy and I'm a girl, but anyways great Job there :D
Cosy Cody chapter 1 . 9/2
I'm a female and I'm pretty sure you got Lucy's thoughts pretty accurate. I think that Lucy's embarrassment was definitely something that would happen if this event ever did become canon. However, what I don't know is whether you got the feelings of love correct, as I've never been in love before (except with Killua from HunterxHunter, love that little white haired cute ass little assassin! ~). Although, I do feel like that's accurate as well, as it was believable that this would happen. Overall a limey masterpiece! 10/10! A! Woooo! - Female Cody
Sheilabff chapter 1 . 6/9
This is by far the best one ever and it had so much detail that it was amazing good work
Fehriechan01 chapter 1 . 5/18
OMG ! I already read the original of this before and thank god you made LUCY POV ! Aahhh !
Still not done reading this but i really wanted to give you my review now XD hihi..

Kenndrick chapter 1 . 4/19
Before you wonder, yes despite my online name I am a female. Yea the train of thought was accurate. I liked the story, especially the part where Natsu freaking purred. But now I'm gonna have a hard time finishing up watching Fairy Tail with this stuff stuck in my head.
BatheMeInSprinkles chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
To the writer by the name of "Lanky Nathan"...
The lemon was soooooo not needed. I really liked reading this, because not only was it grammatically correct, but it was filled to the brim with emotions that I can see Lucy and Natsu feeling. It was great to read, especially when I could *feel* the characters do that. It ended, I wish it hadn't. But all good things come to an end, and this story is no different, right? :) LOOOOVED THIS!
Sharkarella chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
I think you really portrayed Lucy's feelings well. If you hadn't mentioned it I wouldn't have noticed you're a male.
Unknown chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Yay! NaLu _
A Fan1204 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
So i've been meaning to read this for awhile now but i've been procrastinating like usual lol. Pretty well written my friend and i thought you did a decent job of describing Lucy's perspective. Though i'm going to say this right now, im more of a Natsu Lisanna fan than a natsu lucy. Its a close second so i still enjoyed it. I think the lime was pretty good and i bet you could write a lemon if you tried. I know its not your thing but who knows, sometimes lemons can actually drive a plot in certain directions. Certainly not something to not consider for your other story. Keep up the good work man!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
you're a great girl man :) welldone xxx
Trunksmybaby chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Whether it was a lemon or a lime, I really enjoyed it
the-true-Freya chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
No worries, you did great. This fic complimented LittleMissAfflicted's greatly and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it :)
Uchiha Evangeline chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
That was really good, really! Lucy's emotions were portraited beutifully, and since I already loved this story for, what, months now, it was nice seeing her pov.

Just one thing! Not that it was bad or anything, but we girls don't really think cars mechanisms as we speak of our feelings XD The reverse-5th thing was quite nice, but I, as a female cars lover, wouldn't even imagine thinking of it - just a hint, since you actually asked.

Really nice job!
HiiroKumo chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
I can't believe you're a guy! It was so heartfelt and I could feel myself in Lucy's shoes. It was adorable! Still can't believe a guy wrote this. Anyways, very well done. Do more NaLu, pretty please?
miss bubblegum chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
wow, this is great! i cant beleive you got lucy's train of thought so right! you did awesome.
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