Reviews for Third Time's The Charm
BatheMeInSprinkles chapter 1 . 3/1
To the writer by the name of "Lanky Nathan"...
The lemon was soooooo not needed. I really liked reading this, because not only was it grammatically correct, but it was filled to the brim with emotions that I can see Lucy and Natsu feeling. It was great to read, especially when I could *feel* the characters do that. It ended, I wish it hadn't. But all good things come to an end, and this story is no different, right? :) LOOOOVED THIS!
Sharkarella chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
I think you really portrayed Lucy's feelings well. If you hadn't mentioned it I wouldn't have noticed you're a male.
Unknown chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Yay! NaLu _
A Fan1204 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
So i've been meaning to read this for awhile now but i've been procrastinating like usual lol. Pretty well written my friend and i thought you did a decent job of describing Lucy's perspective. Though i'm going to say this right now, im more of a Natsu Lisanna fan than a natsu lucy. Its a close second so i still enjoyed it. I think the lime was pretty good and i bet you could write a lemon if you tried. I know its not your thing but who knows, sometimes lemons can actually drive a plot in certain directions. Certainly not something to not consider for your other story. Keep up the good work man!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
you're a great girl man :) welldone xxx
Trunksmybaby chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Whether it was a lemon or a lime, I really enjoyed it
the-true-Freya chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
No worries, you did great. This fic complimented LittleMissAfflicted's greatly and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it :)
Uchiha Evangeline chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
That was really good, really! Lucy's emotions were portraited beutifully, and since I already loved this story for, what, months now, it was nice seeing her pov.

Just one thing! Not that it was bad or anything, but we girls don't really think cars mechanisms as we speak of our feelings XD The reverse-5th thing was quite nice, but I, as a female cars lover, wouldn't even imagine thinking of it - just a hint, since you actually asked.

Really nice job!
HiiroKumo chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
I can't believe you're a guy! It was so heartfelt and I could feel myself in Lucy's shoes. It was adorable! Still can't believe a guy wrote this. Anyways, very well done. Do more NaLu, pretty please?
miss bubblegum chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
wow, this is great! i cant beleive you got lucy's train of thought so right! you did awesome.
Skittiea chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
I must say, you did a fantastic job at writing this story. You did really well with writing from a girl's point of view. You also did good with the lime section of the story, with a great mix of emotion and physical action. (I hope that last sentence made sense to you, because it looks a bit weird to me. :S) Another thing I found worth mentioning is the way you wrote the story. I don't know if you did this intentionally or if you actually write in that particular way, but you wrote the whole story in LittleMissAfflicted's writing style. I think that is really amazing. Kudos to you and your badassness. :P

All in all, you did a mega awesome fantastic job. :D
Lars Dragneel chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
I like it! ;D
djrhodes488 chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Absolutely utturely amazing! Everytime I read one of your stories I get more and more depressed.

Why can't I write like you? _ ugh!

lol, but seriously you portrayed everything perfectly, congrats!
Hungry AL chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Seems good, great decryption of everything and good attention to detail. I live it when an author takes time to produce quality stories and it shows in everything you've written
Only complaint is natsu seems smarter then in canon but I slide if he wasn't this fic couldn't have existed in the first place :P
Good job!
piggycat350 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012


just whoa.

amazingly written! i loved that you took littlemissafflicted's story and made it from Lucy's POV! I loved her story and yours was pretty spot-on! great job!

save for a couple of spelling errors ("sware for swear", "dopy for dopey"), you did a great job (and from a guy, no less!)

keep writin'!
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