|Reviews for Miko's sister|
| Booknchoc chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
good start but I have some pointers for you.
1. when a character is speaking use speech marks ". this makes it easier for the reader to see which character is speacking next.
2. after a character has spoken start a new paragraph
3. use paragraphs to break up the texts when it goes onto a new topic.
apart from that good story. update soon okay :)