Reviews for The Nightingale
Deleted account - the original chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
I'm guessing Fat Cat is a nickname, but it's still pretty ridiculous. Apart from that, I really enjoyed this. You've got a unique take on the Nightingale concept, you've presented the Thieves Guild well as a big ol' melting pot of personalities, and your fight scene is tight, tense, and clear. You've ended almost all your dialogue with commas instead of full stops (AKA: periods), but that's easily fixed.

I'm looking forward to the other character previews you've mentioned.
Ashley chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
"To serve Nocturnal is to become luck itself."

Nicely written.

It's sad there aren't more stories of the Nightingales from you. Karliah and Brynjolf are awesome!
ReverseSceptile chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Enjoyed it. Love it. Liked it. Waiting for more. xD

Keep up the great work!