Reviews for Equilibrium
doreenthatshot chapter 30 . 7/3/2013
Yup, I knew it was Chris from the start! It was kinda obvious! At least it was to me anyway. ;) I'm eagerly anticipating how you wrap things up with this story. Until then, xx. :)
Kyle chapter 30 . 6/15/2013
Holy crap!

Talk about one heck of a chapter that I choose to jump back into, huh? I've gotta say, this is still hands-down one of the better stories on this website and I'm not afraid to say it. These characters, their situations, the tense and heart-pounding action, yeah... you definitely get it! I LOVED every bit of this chapter, Susannah. You're obviously such a talented writer, you make these stories like tiny films, and for people like me who like to picture everything happening in a story, you're amazing! :D

Please, please, please know how much I appreciate your writing style, okay? :D
doreenthatshot chapter 29 . 5/15/2013
Another great chapter, as always! I'm glad that Phil's finally telling someone about his returning memories. It's a step in the right direction to them officially coming back, as is going back to his apartment. Wow, the security guards taking bets thing was something you witnessed in real-life? So funny! Aw, poor Barbie thinking Matt stood her up! I forgot about their date. I hope it's not too late for Matt, btw! And the guy with the limp was obviously gonna try and do something to Stu had Seth and Kaitlyn not been there. I wonder if that's whose name Stu wrote down for Cody. Hmm... Until next week, xx.

P.S.: Lol at the typo in the second paragraph of the second part of the chapter: "He sighed as he rose to his feet, stretching slightly as 'me' made his way toward the door." :P
GuenVanHelsing chapter 29 . 5/13/2013
eeeeeeeeeeeeeep you're so good at the endings on these things and making us beg for more! Wonderful, absolutely wonderful! 3
doreenthatshot chapter 28 . 4/30/2013
Yup, I knew Eve was involved! Great cliffhanger! I'm definitely excited about the next chapter (this one was good too, btw, and I like the Paul Heyman cameo)! Until next time, xx. :)
GuenVanHelsing chapter 28 . 4/29/2013
Well, hello, was not suspecting that, whoa.

Also, DOOR TO DOOR SALESMAN FOR THE WIN
that was awesome
poor Darren
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Phil is such a cutie

asdfghjkl; i love your writing so muchhhhh
Guest chapter 27 . 4/24/2013
Lovely chapter! I enjoyed the part with the lizards. So cute! And wow, what a cliffhanger you've left us with! I called Stu getting shot as soon as he left the police station, though. Just a hunch. And low and behold a few sentences later, bang! I hope he isn't dead, but I guess we'll soon see. Until next time, xx. :)
GuenVanHelsing chapter 27 . 4/23/2013
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah look at all the cute
this chapter is oozing with cute
THEN CUTE GOES KABOOM AND THE ENDING IS A CLIFFIE
you're so good at those
asdfghjkl; all the cute
doreenthatshot chapter 26 . 4/17/2013
Another fabulous chapter, of course! Nice reunions with Phil and some of the people at the station. It's too bad Scott couldn't talk to him, but I'm sure that's to come. I'm so glad we're nearing the end of this. It'll be fun to see how it all ends. Until next time, xx. :)
doreenthatshot chapter 25 . 4/10/2013
Another great update, as always! It was nice to see the Shawn and Randy cameos! I thought Triple H might be Cody's former mentor for a minute there, but I should have figured it'd be Randy. :) I didn't notice too many clues, per say. Just the one of the limping blonde guy leaving the hospital as Matt was arriving, and also Matt maybe liking Barbara (I aw'ed at the flower part). But not much else. Looking forward to next week's update! Especially after the slight cliffhanger you left us with. Until then, xxx :)
CMPunk199913 chapter 25 . 4/6/2013
Nuuuuuuuu cliffhangerrrrrrr hehe amazinng chapter as always!
Doreenthatshot chapter 24 . 4/4/2013
Another great chapter, of course! So glad that Phil's starting to get some of his memories back. Even if he thinks they're just nightmares. Poor Barbie, though! I hope she's okay. Until next time, xx. :)
CMPunk199913 chapter 24 . 4/2/2013
OMG! You updated! That was amazing! I love the way you write! I love Briar's got a lil crush on Matt daww
Doreen chapter 23 . 3/25/2013
Great chapter, as always! So glad you're updating this again! I think it's obvious who the girl was that the landlord mentioned: Eve. It explains her strange behavior these past few chapters. Not sure who the guy might be, but I'm thinking he's the one in charge. And if he is, then I actually know who that is. Haha! ;) Can't wait till the next update. Hopefully, it'll be soon! Xx :)
CMPunk199913 chapter 23 . 3/23/2013
Welll fudge...that couldn't have been better! I LOVE THIS STORY! I can't help but tear up at the way Punk was injured D': I hope you update sooon
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