|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Fullmetal Alchemist|
| Leafstar16 chapter 29 . 5/19
I'm liking Option A :3
Um...I hope you don't mind me asking, but are you going to post the edited version of this story? Because this one is really awesome and honestly if you've got a better version then I really want to read it...
| Adelheidi36 chapter 5 . 5/13
YOU FORGOT HE IS MISSING A KIDNEY THE BEAM THAT WENT THROUGH HIM (EXCUSE THE CAPS MY KEYBOARD BROKE)
| DJ everything chapter 29 . 4/19
Keep going! The Gate and FulllMetal Shorty commands you!
| Leafdapple3 chapter 29 . 3/8
Hehe, I hope you aren't dead. :P Bu seriously, this is one of the few FMAXHP fics that I can get past chapter twelve of because it's so awesome!
As you said, there will be a long wait (ha, it's already pretty long), so I'll just have to wait.
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/14
I must say that you have the greatest time skips ever.
That is all.
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/13
I feel like a lot of details were a little skimped over. There's not much sensory details, making it sound a little like a summary.
That doesn't mean I don't love the story though! I just love Ed and I'm glad you didn't make him too OOC like some of the other FMA/HP crossovers.
| tontonte chapter 18 . 2/11
Ok I gotta say, when I saw that break that was all like
NOT DOING MY MATH HOMEWORK
I nearly fell of my chair
And possibly broke a rib or two from trying not to laugh
Cuz guess what I'm doing right now?
Not doing my math homework.
| Shadowheart51 chapter 29 . 1/27
I really love this story. I don't see why you don't keep updating on this. Updating at random times isn't bad. The next chapter may take longer to write or come up with. It's that way for me.
| Fairy of the Friz chapter 29 . 1/16
*dies laughing* I love your omakes, as well as the Al painting! And yay for Ed, he got his alchemy back! *cheers*
You're really good, I can't wait to see what happens next! Please continue, and good luck with everything!
(also, I am trying the cupcake recipe on my next day off, they look delicious!)
| Guest chapter 29 . 12/7/2014
Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaasse update !
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/7/2014
I love how Ed curses!
| piegirl012 chapter 29 . 12/7/2014
You should keep on writing this
I rely love the parts when they react to eds past
| ShadowPillow chapter 29 . 11/16/2014
Option C, since then we can just follow and see when it's updated. Or if you post an author's note saying that the edited version is released, then option A is fine. But maybe option B then... because the author's note would be deleted. So I'll just go with option B if there's an author's note.
Anyway, my actual review on this story:
So I read this straight through, and I have a little bit to say about this story. To be honest, at first the writing wasn't the best and there was a lot of "Ed's really cool, he's better than all these wimpy wizards." But I kept on reading it because something that was really clear in your writing was that you really loved writing it. Just having fun with writing whatever you're doing it. And that's why I like this story. I won't favorite it yet, since I try to favorite the stories that I really really really like (that hasn't been working out too well, I've been reading so much the list has been increasing), but I will definitely read the updated version and follow this. In these last few chapters, your writing has significantly improved and I'm looking forward to reading that writing. Just don't forget that you need to enjoy it, and all of your little comments in between the line breaks always made me laugh a little :)
Have an awesome life, and keep on writing!
| Guest chapter 18 . 11/16/2014
And do your homework right now! XD
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/16/2014
How much do you eat XD