Reviews for Fade
Inconstant Logic chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
This is really nice. I'm not sure whether or not James actually killed Peter's father (it's been a while since I last saw it), but I really loved how you described his reaction to his mother's death, as well as his hesitation at taking care of Peter.

There were some grammatical and spelling errors which bugged me, particularly at the beginning, it might be a good idea to look over it again. No offence intended. But this was enjoyable to read, I'm glad you uploaded it.
Sebastian's Servant Felicia chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
This was pretty good, I liked it :)