Reviews for Flow
Rayless Night chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Ryoji and Aigis are pretty similar aren't they? - both fulfilling their purpose in the Dark Hour, both being hidden for ten years, and both very curious and observant regarding the human world, but not really at home in it. It makes sense that they'd both feel they had something missing inside. You did a good job capturing all these commonalities, as well as the pair's very different personalities: Ryoji extroverted and almost aggressively personable, Aigis much more wary, but still willing to open up (a bit) once she sees she and Ryoji feel the same.


You should try to smooth out your sentences. For instance, "Aigis didn't like the casual tone he was talking saying his name but she kept quiet and continued to study him." reads awkwardly.

Also, be the on the watch for spelling and grammar typos.
MoonLit Assassin chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Great short read, love aegis :D