|Reviews for Broken|
| Wissa38 chapter 11 . 11/10/2013
Wonderful! I just love the Regina you've created. Damaged and vulnerable and just wonderful. Sigh.
I'd love to see another story where the curse does break. I'd love to see a story where the curse breaks and Emma actually stands up for Regina. Stands by her. And so does Henry.
Anyway, thanks for sharing your writing. It was a great way to spend a lazy Sunday morning.
| Wissa38 chapter 9 . 11/10/2013
I love this story. I really do.
| Wissa38 chapter 7 . 11/10/2013
I love what you're doing with Regina. I like her.
And what's up with the arrest?
| Lanaholic chapter 11 . 9/1/2013
End, to bad... Thanks for sharing this! Liked it!
"If it's true that evil isn't born, it's made, then goodness needs to be made as well.", I agree
| Lanaholic chapter 10 . 9/1/2013
I think I just died... the end of this chapter -.-
| Lanaholic chapter 6 . 9/1/2013
Really liked those 'bruises thoughts', if you know what I mean.. that those feel wrong..
Very nice idea which fits perfectly.
Oh no, only 5 chapters to go :(
| Lanaholic chapter 2 . 8/31/2013
Very nice so far!
| sqfangirl chapter 11 . 5/15/2013
Great story. Well written and fluffy yet hot at the same time. Loved it!
| WistfulLove chapter 11 . 4/18/2013
Great sequel, really loved this.
The second person point of view is really different for a longer fic, but you definitely pulled it off. I think the only downside to it is there isn't as much conversation between the characters. It's mostly description.
Either way, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. :)
| Nicky Evelyn chapter 11 . 2/28/2013
Totally loved this, it's 6.15 am now, and told myself to finally go to bed after every chapter, but somehow I just kept on reading!
Love your style, the emotion, the capturing of characters, the rage, the desire, all of it.
| ithinkyourewonderful chapter 11 . 2/17/2013
Such a beautiful and sweet story - I adored the use of lists as their means of communication!
| Wolliw chapter 11 . 1/9/2013
This is a beautiful story all the way. Your language is gorgeous. Just one of many memorable lines: "His small arms are gathering the broken pieces of your soul and knitting them back together." Your exploration of the redemptive power of love was breathtaking, and fit perfectly with the relationship between Emma and Regina. Thank you for sharing!
| femphoenix chapter 11 . 12/11/2012
This was a lovely story and I'm happy to say I read it straight through!
| Recondita chapter 11 . 11/28/2012
As I grinned my way through this story, I slowly realized how smooth their transition from fuck buddy to lover was. I adore when it happens without them noticing, and without the readers noticing.
Reading the last chapter, than glancing at the prequel, it's almost shocking how different they are.
For most of it, I believed it really could happen. It could be happening, and now I'm filled with hopes. Your prose is amazing, it have such a good flow. And I love how classy you kept it - really, it's rare to find a casual sex story that isn't very trashy.
Thank you for sharing it! My evening was well spent with a cocoa and such lovely story.
| blondiecsi chapter 11 . 11/8/2012
Beautifully written ! Perfect !