Reviews for Red vs Blue: Retribution
HardcoreRVB chapter 37 . 6/19/2014
I've been reading your Stories for a while now and I have to say you are an astounding author who dedicated to her work. The only thing I would say and,no sexism intended,it seems all the bad ass characters are give one for the guys?thats all I have to say right now but I hope you keep on writing as you are amazing at it
Guest chapter 14 . 3/16/2014
Fucin' Fajhad from the Spartain II program and drop out due to medical difficulties and YOU SPELLED IT WRONG u spelled it like a tech support guy from india
Guest chapter 37 . 2/22/2014
mnnn nice
activemars828 chapter 24 . 12/8/2013
Carolina is half forerunner? Ok this is interesting keep it up!
Tony chapter 9 . 12/1/2013
Why did she say my c-Virgiania
the mass halo effect chapter 36 . 6/16/2013
Took me way longer than it should've to get to read this but it was worth it this chapter was extremely well written and I can't wait for the next chapter
euan mahon chapter 36 . 4/26/2013
this story is very good it is well written and has a good feel of suspense wondering what will happen next if you dont mind me asking will there be anymore chapters also will more freelancers return like Wash, Maine, Wyoming etc etc i would love to see them return but other than that an awesome story keep up the good work :)
XxeuanxD chapter 36 . 4/26/2013
this is really good and well written the best story fine i have red that is to do with red vs blue it is really exciting wondering what will happen next will there be more chapters also will Wash,Wyoming etc etc return i would like to see the freelancers come back but still awesome story keep the good work up :)
Starcross23 chapter 35 . 4/13/2013
when is the next chapter coming up?
Starcross23 chapter 36 . 2/21/2013
so every 3 chapters there could be a flashback chapter?
missmoney101 chapter 4 . 2/16/2013
This story's really good; it's well written, has an interesting plot and I think you've captured the characters' personalities extremely well. Keep 'em coming!
the mass halo effect chapter 34 . 2/11/2013
Great chapter but your right it just wasn't as happy as the last
gizmo16x chapter 34 . 2/11/2013
Oh, boy. Kao Jin just earned himself a nice little corner in hell, and North's gonna take him there personally. I can't wait to see that.
the mass halo effect chapter 33 . 1/29/2013
Great chapter and nice inclusion of halo 4 though commander Palmer came off as a little too mean though you could say that's part of the situation...and York who's real name by the way is James not Daniel and way back at the beginning of this story I remember something about York getting things from his girlfriend are there connections there or is it just me but all in all excellent chapter
Guest chapter 32 . 1/17/2013
Great chapter and thanks for the cliffhanger just at one point you changed the spelling of Skye island to sky island
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