Reviews for When the Time is Right
DestroyerDRT chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
You should do a sequel or two one from Mindy's point of view about how she feels about Dave at the same time that this one takes place. And one the happens when she is 18 and hunts him down to show her feeling for him.
Amaris-the-Demon chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
For your firsy fic this is REALLY good. Keep up the great work!
Makokam chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Hmmm...not bad.

I do question what kind of world would allow for them to to have been doing this for no less than three years and not have Marcus pick up on it though.

Anyway...I'd guess you're going with the comic!verse where Marcus married Mindy's Mother(Which is the only way Marcus could be her STEPfather)...but
you didn't mention /reading/ the comic, and well, Katie, so...let's just go with that anyway -awkward!smile-

Also...how could a matress be made any more or less comfortable by the addition or removal of sheets?

Anyway, still cute. Hope it ends well for him.

Makokam out.