|Reviews for Relinquish|
| Invisibleme1324 chapter 19 . 10/2/2013
i love this story and i love how you ended it :)
| amgonyea chapter 19 . 8/24/2013
| Amnex chapter 19 . 7/2/2013
So sad please continue
| Black Bart Lady chapter 19 . 6/10/2013
This was so freaking good! I loved it
| guest chapter 19 . 5/26/2013
This fic mostly frustrated me, didn't seem like Stiles and Lydia at all. I felt bad for Stiles throughout the entire thing, he's too good for Lydia. I love Stiles and Lydia together but this just frustrated me. Yes it's true that people will always have a place for their first love in their hearts but when it doesn't work out, they end up finding greater love. Good example would be Peter Parker, Gwen Stacy and Mary Jane Watson.
So Lydia pining over and always going back to Jackson like that was horrible and made no sense when she admitted to herself that Stiles was the better man. And she even admitted that what she felt for Stiles felt different and better than what she felt for Jackson but that was a couple chapter back and she was still pining and going after Jackson. I don't like Jackson, he is one of my least favourite characters in the show.
Stiles is so incredibly sweet, anyone would be lucky to have him.
I was hoping this fic would be more about Stiles trying to get over Lydia and her chasing after him for a change. Instead, he was still pining over her and not moving on at all. I would have loved to see more jealous Lydia and more Stiles/Allison and Stiles/Erica. Honestly, if nothing else you made me like Stiles and Allison together, i loved that she had a crush on him.
But yeah this fic frustrated and annoyed me for the most part, no offense. And yes the first couple chapters were hard to read because there was no spacing and separating of dialogue.
| THLadyNightshade chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
Interesting beginning. I am liking how this is going so far. I really think that for them to be a believable couple on the show, they will have to become friends first. So kudos to you.
| Heidi chapter 19 . 1/24/2013
Perfect ending to a perfect story
| samanthaxama chapter 19 . 1/6/2013
wow ! so cute and great ! i loved the end it was great XD
| Phoebe chapter 18 . 12/24/2012
Oh my god, that last chapter broke my heart. I love this story!
| amgonyea chapter 18 . 12/4/2012
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
If your struggling with writers block (which I know can be a massive pain), maybe a suggestion would help? Maybe Stiles and Lydia come to this big confrontation with one another and Lydia finally snaps and tells him he cant keep pushing her away and it basically ending in Lydia telling him how she feels? :)
| amgonyea chapter 17 . 12/2/2012
Great "filler" chapter. Im happy that u put in a scene with lydia talking about stiles and one with stiles talking about lydia. I thought that was important to set up for the upcoming chapters :) and im glad to see that lydia is struggling with her decision/ feelings
| Leti chapter 16 . 11/14/2012
So glad you posted another chapter :)
I just want Lydia to realize Stiles is the best choice for her. He really loves her, he cares about her in a way Jackson will never do.
| Amanda chapter 16 . 11/12/2012
Amazing chapter! So glad you updated
| savan7 chapter 16 . 11/11/2012
Why can't Lydia just love stiles? He's soooooo perfect compared to Jackson. why can't she just realize that she's hurting Jackson doesn't even want to be with her anymore!
Hed rather Go off with the little alpha pack anyway...soooooo Lydia shouls just go and be with stiles instead.
On another note I think it would be really cool if u could mix into the story who issac lost it to hahanow i'm all curious if it was Erica or not haha well if u could reveal the answer to that that stiles pondered on I would love u lol
yea soooooo Ute a great writer and I love this story so I can't wait to read more tehehe oh and I Pologize for not reading the story sooner :( bye bye :D