Reviews for Christmas Surprise
Guest chapter 4 . 4/7/2015
I'm actually pissing myself
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
Oh Jesus I read this back when it was first put on, and once again I'm literally laughing so hard I'm crying its so perfect
Daydreams-About-Fallen-Stars chapter 2 . 2/28/2014
Godzilla with her skirt tucked into her knickers... and she's not even pissed!
TealFeatheredFangirl chapter 12 . 1/6/2014
Despite the little fact it is 01;17 in the morning I shouted Yay! She's pregnant really loud and probably woke everyone up!
TealFeatheredFangirl chapter 10 . 1/6/2014
She's going to get pregnant again!
TealFeatheredFangirl chapter 7 . 1/6/2014
In tears.
TealFeatheredFangirl chapter 5 . 1/6/2014
TealFeatheredFangirl chapter 3 . 1/6/2014
Awesome! Gill gonna be a mummy again!
Didget chapter 12 . 10/17/2012
ahh a plot twist... this should be intrsesting :) awesome. can't wait to read the next cahpter! although i wish kevin was quite so drunk... o_O
xoMelxo chapter 12 . 10/16/2012
so im going to review again because i love this story so much and omg i do.
1) how it all starts makes me laugh so much; "nice boobs boss" eeeeeeek! the spaghetti idea is brilliant. if you meet my future boyfriend make him do that for me! alsooo, Kevin is on his phone to his mummy, awwwwh! hehehe they are actually extremely cute! i am so glad i am in this story as well, everytime i read Sammy and Melissa i get this amazing smile come on my face ehehhehee;D the last line "sexay time" as you would say;D
2) i cannot believe this was originally a one-shot, i think by now, we all know one-shots arent very successful when it comes to fanfiction and fangirls;D buuut Kevin in his boxers, yummmmmy! my jokes, oh i am so punny. (wink wink) the sly times in the alley..hehehehehehe why can i see this?! omg it seems forever since we were talking about what/where they were going to do things! time flys so quickly! Gill's lipstick on his cheek, such a cringey moment until the end! ;O the last line again, oh my days.
3) i am so glad you made her pregnant. good old no contraceptives;') Kevin can be such a nause sometimes, omfg. "do you want me to draw you a picture?" i wanna see this picture heheheeheh! (im sorry, im hyper) the age thing makes me laugh a lot. Gill's 46?! wow. anyway, your last lines are so cute. i melt on like, everyone.
4) Kevin moving in is so cute! Him and those boxes;D he is honestly so sweet, helping! Well, trying to help! Sammy and Mel are engaged yaaaaaay;D hehehehe no grandchildren she said, hmmm;D “Sammyboy” cracks me up everytime heheh! Melissa is so cute as well;’) aren’t i?! it’s a she sure about that? “a cute knob”. Was It only me that if you read that without reading the line above it sounds dirty? ;’) anyway, omg this. This this this. I LOVE their outfits, so much! Hahahahahaaha I cant stop laughing, omg I'm just seeing this being played in my head and keep laughing! Kevins “swag” leaves a lot to be desired;D I am so glad they are getting married. Its so cute. Awwwwwww.
5) ok so mels pregnant. Damn underagers ;D well technically she's not, but the real mel is;’) anyway, Rachel is pretty gormless in this…. Sophie and gabby are amazing friends! I don’t want to drink on my birthday… hmmmmm ;D oh trust Kevin to look where hes not wanted. Oh dear. Hehehee Gills happy yaaay;D
6) this chapter started off lovely and happy, shopping with the mother-to-be-in-law, then bam. Bloody dave shows up. I swear I'm going to have to do something about him. Gills shopping is amazing, I want her to buy my presents hehe! Gill waddling is so cute! Dave needs to sod off. I'm sorry but he is suuuuuch a pig! Kevin upset is so cute, but I really want to cry for them both!
7) I cant believe she lost the baby. I still cant. The name is beautiful, awwwww! I want to hug them all so much! Really so much! The baby is so small, omg. The last line. I am crying again awwwwwwww!
8) I'm glad Julie's gonna catch that pig! Rachel drunk. Again. obh dear ;’) “shh! Don’t tell Gill” Rachel needs to be careful ;’) “shit indeed mr murray” GO Julie! GO Kevin!
9) baking cakes! Yummy! Oh my gosh, its this chapter. Heheheheehe I love this. I am so tempted to frame it. oh, I showed it my mum btw, she loved it ;’) she said that she hopes she wasn’t like that in London ;’) she thinks its very good! Gill and Camilla’s bitching is hilarious. Gill should win this ;D I love this so much! The dress…I wonder where I've seen heard that before? ;’) loved the glasses thing! You babe!
10) yaay! The wedding! Love kevins choice of words, got to admit, they worked! ;’) that bloody sandwich hehe ;’) the hotel sounds lovely! I wonder what they're up to…
11) I want to go to venice. Fancy another road trip?! Anyway, the ice cream parlour is so cute! Everything is so cute! The boats…oh my ;’) gill running around talking to randomers… THIS SHOULD BE AN EPISODE I DON’T KNOW. I can’t describe my love for this, I absolutely adore it.
12) Gill to think about wine…hahahaha trussssst. Their marriage needs to hurry up! ;) *cough next sequel cough* Gill walking in with barely a top on, that must have been so awkward. Oooh I wonder why Gill’s sticking to the coke? ;’) awwwww Mels baby! I know I only reviewed a couple of days ago, but it needs to be said again. awwwwwwww! Kevins drunk. Yep. The last line. Omfg. ANOTHER SEQUEL NOWWWW. Otherwise I shall come to your house and force you to type ! ;D
Ok, that turned out to be a random pile of chiz, buuuuuut I love it ;’) hehehe had you noticed? I am very sorry if you are still reading this. I am. Well, maybe a bit. Or not a lot. Hehe. Mwah! oxoxox
melissapaigex chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
ok, as i keep saying; YOU BAAABBBBEEE.
i love this story so much omg i want this to either be a "special" episode or an extra.

it is amazing, like seriously amazing.
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i'm a mummy;D heheehe Skye is a beautiful name awwww!

Gill and Kevin are naughty naughty;) how awks walking in with an undone top!
Gills tears, awhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

omg she pregnant. omg yaaaay. she had better have this baby miss abbott!

alsooo, i cant remember if i dreamt this, or i read it;') buuuuut you said there was going to be a sequal?!

if there is, i cannot wait and you better get writing ASAPPPPP.
if there isnt, GET WRITING ASAPPPPP.

love this hehehehehehehe;D XOXOXOXOXOXO.
GigglingGirl chapter 12 . 10/13/2012
How can I love you and hate you so much at the same time?! Answer me?! Oh my fish that was so amazing. Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. But no. Whhhhy end it? Whhhhhyy?! How can you do this to me I've know you for what 18, 19 weeks (I haven't the foggiest if I'm honest but that's irrelevant.) wwewwhhyyy. But it was so good. Wwwwwwhhhhyyyy?! I looooove Gill. And Mel you actual babe. Annnnd Gill. Yaaaaay but wwhhhy. And oh my fish the door incident. Oh fish that's just to hilarious. Literally I woke the children up through laughing so yeah thanks for that. Just wow. But whhhy?! Okay starting to repeat my self just a tad buuuuuttt whyyyyyyy?! Okay live you lots. Byeeeeee. P.S whhhhyyy?! Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxx
Rebaforever15 chapter 12 . 10/13/2012
Aww she has a Grandaughter and she's pregnant again. OMG. Please write more xxxx
GigglingGirl chapter 11 . 10/10/2012
Oh my fish! How sweet is Kevin? He is an actual babe! He does so many sweet things for Gill and I am just here dying! And omf that Ice Cream shop awww! And the gondola. AND CONGRATULATIONS MEL! This is so amazing and I love it and I love you! Xxxxxx
xomelxo chapter 11 . 10/9/2012
My goodness. Omg.
Naughty Gill and Kevin sleeping in;) tut tut!
Aww Kevins cute litte breakfast! He's such a gentlemen omg what a babe! Gill sounds lovely;)
You seem to know your art/ your way around venice wow! Omg the icecream shop is just the cutest thing ever and the whole thing with Kevins grandad is just omg!
Gill seems to get all the attention in that dress doesn't she?!;)
Omg the boat. I started giggling before I had even read it, but omg you are a legend!
The strawberries thing was just perfect, and Kevin really cares! The boat. Oh my fish. (Just to steal Sophies thing;)) oh em eff geee;D amazing "splash" hehehe I would LOVE to see them act this out omg!
Yaaay the baby's coming! Omg Baby Murray wooo!;) I'm going to be a mum:p
Haahahahahahah Gill running round omg I can't stop laughing just thinking/picturing that!

Well done, wellllll donneeeeeee! Dhsadhskhadzx! Cannot wait for the next chapter, eeeeeeeeeek! 33333333333
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