Reviews for Twilight Reworked
RandomPerson1088 chapter 15 . 4/11/2015
This book is AWESOME! I really like your back stories for the characters. Finally a story that has actually been spell-checked. Please write more stories like this! Unless this something for school, because the summary sounds like that. Either for school or you are just being very professional. Good job!
Tiggy318 chapter 21 . 4/5/2015
Really liked this retelling! !
cela chapter 20 . 11/16/2014
that was fantastic! who knew what a little loving from Edward would do to bella's ingenuity!
TrillionSchiffer chapter 21 . 3/22/2014
What a mood killer. Morose Masen, always looking for something to brood over.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 20 . 3/22/2014
aaaaaahhhhhh what?
TrillionSchiffer chapter 19 . 3/22/2014
So B and E did the deed then...Nothing... No mention of it at all. AND YOU STILL HAVE HIM LEAVE IN PART 2 NEW MOON. Gawd, I would've thought you would've have changed that! smh
TrillionSchiffer chapter 18 . 3/22/2014
I like that laurent brought up the fact that James can't help himself but Edward can. And Edward was the monster for choosing to kill instead of putting aside his arrogance.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 15 . 3/22/2014
I don't get it, how did Esme maker die In a fire? wasn't she fast enough to get out, it doesn't make much sense.

you told a great backstory up until that point . After that it just got I also know there has to be a lot more going on in that story maybe you can write a story about that
TrillionSchiffer chapter 14 . 3/21/2014
nice story
TrillionSchiffer chapter 12 . 3/21/2014
Well done. Niceely written chapter. This gave a much better insight to what happened in those first days. I liked it.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 9 . 3/21/2014
What was that about age an not being able to read minds, and Jasper being the one to save emmett and not rosalie. ? why change that?
TrillionSchiffer chapter 8 . 3/21/2014
Yeah, breaking the news here does seem a better fit. Good job.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 6 . 3/20/2014
HELLLLLOOOO story teller. Now we're getting somewhere. NICe NICE NICE!
TrillionSchiffer chapter 4 . 3/20/2014
Same ...mostly. But seriously. Your only tweaking enough not to get sued. I guess Bella confusion is slightly better, but other than that...
TrillionSchiffer chapter 3 . 3/20/2014
very very minor tweaks but ...still the same stuff.
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