|Reviews for Twilight Reworked|
| RandomPerson1088 chapter 15 . 4/11/2015
This book is AWESOME! I really like your back stories for the characters. Finally a story that has actually been spell-checked. Please write more stories like this! Unless this something for school, because the summary sounds like that. Either for school or you are just being very professional. Good job!
| Tiggy318 chapter 21 . 4/5/2015
Really liked this retelling! !
| cela chapter 20 . 11/16/2014
that was fantastic! who knew what a little loving from Edward would do to bella's ingenuity!
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 21 . 3/22/2014
What a mood killer. Morose Masen, always looking for something to brood over.
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 20 . 3/22/2014
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 19 . 3/22/2014
So B and E did the deed then...Nothing... No mention of it at all. AND YOU STILL HAVE HIM LEAVE IN PART 2 NEW MOON. Gawd, I would've thought you would've have changed that! smh
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 18 . 3/22/2014
I like that laurent brought up the fact that James can't help himself but Edward can. And Edward was the monster for choosing to kill instead of putting aside his arrogance.
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 15 . 3/22/2014
I don't get it, how did Esme maker die In a fire? wasn't she fast enough to get out, it doesn't make much sense.
you told a great backstory up until that point . After that it just got I also know there has to be a lot more going on in that story maybe you can write a story about that
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 14 . 3/21/2014
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 12 . 3/21/2014
Well done. Niceely written chapter. This gave a much better insight to what happened in those first days. I liked it.
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 9 . 3/21/2014
What was that about age an not being able to read minds, and Jasper being the one to save emmett and not rosalie. ? why change that?
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 8 . 3/21/2014
Yeah, breaking the news here does seem a better fit. Good job.
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 6 . 3/20/2014
HELLLLLOOOO story teller. Now we're getting somewhere. NICe NICE NICE!
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 4 . 3/20/2014
Same ...mostly. But seriously. Your only tweaking enough not to get sued. I guess Bella confusion is slightly better, but other than that...
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 3 . 3/20/2014
very very minor tweaks but ...still the same stuff.