|Reviews for It's All His Fault|
| AnonOne chapter 3 . 1h ago
I think your decision to rewrite wasn't bad at all. It's a refreshing start so far.
| TheRyomaEchizen chapter 3 . 6h ago
OMG OMG OMG! Is she going to keep her memory this time around! That would be awesome!
| silverwolfigther00 chapter 3 . 7h ago
this was really interesting and exiting to read. i wonder where in the timesone we are, my guess is before byakuya became a shinigami and before the hollowfication of the captains and lutainants.
im looking foreward to read about the next chapter
| DocHoliday0316 chapter 3 . 10h ago
Great chapter, Kalafina! And I don't mind that you restarted it. It'll make it much more easier to follow the story if you rework it to remove potholes and other confusing things.
BTW, you consider making a TV tropes page for this story.
| VampireHuntress72095 chapter 3 . 18h ago
I will say it again. It's fresh now.
If you, as the author feels it requires editing then the readers have no right to complain. If you decide that you are willing to put in the extra work the editing will do to improve on the overall enjoyment and quality of the story then by all means take as much time as you need to work on the chapters.
I would be interested in taking participation of the cover art but I would need to read more from this to see what the general feel of what direction this is now taking. Especially concerning Sakura's Zanpakuto/Bankai if she's still getting one.
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 3 . 19h ago
Wow, that's pretty darn good:)
| xbLoOmZx chapter 2 . 3/10
I would like to say I hate you for do this but I can understand being frustrated with plot holes and such. I respect your decision and will keep on reading. Please update soon!
| Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 2 . 3/10
| BlackSakura-chi chapter 2 . 3/10
WHY?! WHY?! Why?! I loved your story! It was so great! Why?! TTTT
| TheUchiha'sLegacy chapter 1 . 3/10
This is for chapter 2.
No doubt it's better, but I personally believe that a story with over ten chapters shouldn't be rewritten. A lot of the times, the readers don't care how well you rewrite it- they just care about the story itself. Sometimes it'll frustrate them to have to read over the whole entire story again, so they'll just quit reading it. Happens all the time.
I would've just made a new story for the rewritten version and have kept the old up just for the other readers, but that's just my opinion.
Good job though. Improving your writing is always a good thing.
| VampireHuntress72095 chapter 2 . 3/9
I'm not gonna say that I didn't like the original because it did have good points hand in hand with the flaws, but I will say that I'm not unhappy that you decided to edit this story. It feels fresh now. Though it would be nice if you kept the original somewhere that maybe someone would like to read so they can see the difference in the writing.
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 2 . 3/9
Yo Kala! Noticed the redo:). Looks really freakish good! I hope my OC still has a place in it though. Keep it up and keep me posted my friend!
| Sharkbait-ooohaha chapter 37 . 3/6
Please please please update soon I need to know what happens! I love this story SOOO much please finish your editing quickly!
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/1
Several HUGE inconsistencies: humans DO NOT REMEMBER THEIR MORTAL LIVES usually. God, I hate authors who completely ignore canon rules. If you wanted her to remember, you should have kept her alive, stupid. Christ.
| deisediva123 chapter 37 . 2/26
I was wondering whether there will be anyone sakura gets romantically interest? ((which I'm kinda hoping for))