|Reviews for The Forever Kiss|
| Literati Lover chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
| ravenheartlim chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
speechless dude... speechless... now this is descriptive! it got glued inside my head! XD
| crystalblue19 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Aw, so cute and their kids sound adorable too! x) lol and Maka's pregnant again. xD
| BlueDragonIsAwesome chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Woah! You surprised me with that ending. With the way Maka and Kid were talking about having another child, I thought she wasn't ready. lol. I loved the characters you brought in; Kami and Crona. Adorable! You should add more chapters about their lives as a family and growing up. Also how they would react to the news.
There were just a few grammar mistakes, but it wasn't serious. The most recurring thing was:
Loved the idea. Absolutely adored the content. And the summary wasn't bad. Good job! :)
| Inhumane Side chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Oh my God! This is sooooooooo sweet and a cliffhanger, hinting us that there would be more. Keep writing! You're story is awesome! :D
| CherriDoll chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Wait it's over :( No it can't be. You can't drop a bombshell pregnancy like that and not continue! Alos I would Make Chrona's eyes gold like his Papa's because where would the blue eye's come from? This was really really cute. More Please!