Reviews for The Gate Keeper
story magic chapter 2 . 5/7
is there going to be more, this is really good
Fmafan chapter 1 . 1/19
Al: So you're truth?!
Ed: Actually, I'm a temp.
Coolc341 chapter 2 . 9/3/2016
I really do like this fic, but it's marked as completed and I doubt it'll be updated. But I'll put my two cense in anyways. Love RoyEd, hate EdWin. You did a lovely job in the fic, great work!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/21/2014
Wouldn't it be funny if it turned into Roy and Al being together after Ed's joke? Maybe they think they'll try to provoke Ed's overprotectiveness of his brother but they really do fall for each other? I know it's a common theme but I think it'd be so cute with these characters! I love your idea for Ed's price for Al's body :)
Guest chapter 2 . 9/14/2014
Pls pls pls make this Edwin!
SaberAureum chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
Make an EdxWin!
Chibi-twan chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
Please write more! out of all the fanfictions i read yours i actually want to see/read more of! it's really good!
DarkForestWolf chapter 2 . 9/6/2012
I love this story! Please keep up the good work! :D
Bloodyrose23 chapter 2 . 8/31/2012
Ok i know i say every story/chapter of yours is awesome but it really is great work keep it can't wait for the update XD also poor ed DX
D.P.Master01 chapter 2 . 8/31/2012
Yay! Another Chapter!
Interesting... is Ed wishing to go back to normal?
DarkForestWolf chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
I liked this story. Keep up the good work. :)
D.P.Master01 chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Oh... poor Ed...
Please Continue!
Bloodyrose23 chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
that was ... Awesome please make more :)