|Reviews for Claws|
| Tsaukpaetra chapter 2 . 10/14/2012
The second-person POV for this chapter was disjointing at the beginning, especially as I forgot it was Lucas that was narrating.
Kinda interesting why he's fainting though. So far, he hasn't been noted as being particularly gifted in that area as far as we know...
Keep going! ;)
| Tsaukpaetra chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I love premonitory dreams! Also, what are bears doing in the fridge!? Just a few word-confusion instances here, but you're off to a good start. Alas their graduation night sounds almost identical to mine, except I had no friends to talk with :/
And why only a few days? Lets make it longer! *winks*
Keep going! :)