|Reviews for The Queen of Unintended Consequences|
| psymplemind chapter 16 . 11/13/2013
Well done. Far away from the TVD TV show but that's more than all right...
| psymplemind chapter 15 . 11/13/2013
Wow! I love it. In your sequel I'm praying Elena matures and comes to her senses!
| psymplemind chapter 14 . 11/13/2013
Seems very possible/accurate. I like this ch very much :)
| psymplemind chapter 13 . 11/13/2013
This about TVD TV show: I fear they are going to end with Damon sacrificing himself for Elena or elena&stefan...sort of like Spike sacrificing himself to save humanity because of his love for Buffy
Wait and see what happens with Capt Hook. He is SO Damon!
I love Gloria in your version just like I loved Bonnie's mom (Sheila?) Bonnie I wanted to take and drop kick across campus before she died...this season I'm liking her again but that's because of Jeremy! And she's not bitching out Damon every 2 seconds!
| psymplemind chapter 12 . 11/13/2013
You write Elena having rational epiphanies then jump to a completely irrational thought process just after
Borderline personality disordered people are 100% capable of that but Elena's NOT BPD! Bi-polars are not like this. Crazy erratic behaviors? Yes. But their thought cycles are not characterizes by sudden leaps back and forth within mere seconds or minutes.
She's not delusional. She is in extreme denial ramped up by an extreme fear factor...hmmmmmmmm
| psymplemind chapter 11 . 11/13/2013
The Delena fans all 'get' that Damon is the better man...the Stelena fans HATE Damon with the fire of a thousand suns. Some even hate Ian because he plays Damon! How could anybody hate Ian? One of the most humane, compassionate, kind human beings on the planet! Ian is one of my top heroes because of the ISF and how hard he works for green energy and climate change consciousness.
| psymplemind chapter 10 . 11/13/2013
I don't blame him (in this version)
| psymplemind chapter 9 . 11/13/2013
OMG. I love Ladyhawke. I used it when I teaching archetypes to newbies...they totally 'get' the Hero archetype in Star Wars and The Matrix but they totally miss that Mouse is the hero NOT Navarre and then ding-ding-ding it hits them and then they never miss it again. Aaron is the hero in Revolution not Miles, Charlie, Or Monroe
So anyway, great chapter but I'm beginning to wonder if Elena is ever going to give Damon any slack in this story...
| psymplemind chapter 8 . 11/13/2013
"Traveling band of idiots"
I love it! :). Yep! They are the Scoobie Gang. Buffy had her Scoobie Gang too :)
| psymplemind chapter 7 . 11/13/2013
Very nice alternate version...2 thumbs up!
| psymplemind chapter 6 . 11/13/2013
My perception of Elena being mean to him was to unconsciously push him away because she was attracted to him (defense mechanism: reaction formation). Classic love story tool (and actually happens in RL)
| psymplemind chapter 5 . 11/13/2013
Good chapter. If the momma cat is/was your cat I'm hoping you've had her spayed.
| psymplemind chapter 4 . 11/13/2013
Damon was around 24 when he was turned and Stefan 17. Stefan was emotionally immature ( Mother Nature) but Damon was a young man. I'd hate to be stuck eternally as a teenager! Evan tho you might live hundreds of years and gain knowledge you would prob remain less rational when things got emotional
| psymplemind chapter 3 . 11/13/2013
Liking your story...
| psymplemind chapter 2 . 11/13/2013
Good to go...