|Reviews for cut the ribbons|
| Thunderbreeze chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
Very true - dreams do crazy things. This was neat, thank you for writing it. :)
| Chess chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
| Kigaroo chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
This was sweet!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
MY HEART IS SCREAMING ;u;
This was BEAUTIFUL. Your Chessshipping FICS are the best I've read!
Please write more! :)
| Basse Cerise chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
HEY THERE AGAIN! :D
This is such a good FanFiction Fanfic; mainly because it's by you! Your writing is so awesome and mature and majestic! :O
Well, keep writing please! Merci!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
tis beautiful my friend. tis beautiful. LONG LIVE CHESSSHIPPING!
| Experiment Nova chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
I love this story!
But...when it said that Black cut his hair...does that mean that he's supposed to look sort of like Kyohei/Nate?
And how tall was the cliff anyway o.0
I think that Black must have a supernatural body if he survived a fall from a freakishly high cliff...
| ColdBlueGirl chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Excellent work! I really enjoyed reading your story. The details and personalities you incorporate are really interesting and it keeps the reader going, wanting to know what will happen next. It was really an amazing story. Continue with the great work!
| khdayskh1314 chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
ive thought of Touya and Touko being champion hundreds of times but ive never thought of the elite four, Alder and them two being one big happy family...ITS PERFECT!
Oh how I wish they decided to use this idea in BW2...
| Awsaya chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Just to give you a clue as to how much I adore this story: I read it nearly one week ago, and since life has been throwing many obstacles at me lately, I did not have any time to review. And so, I kept it bookmarked on my phone just so I could return to this lovely piece and leave my opinion when I found the time.
Quite honestly, authors such as yourself do not get the credit or reviews they truly deserve as compensation for their work. You took two great characters and essentially moulded them into individuals who come across as beyond riveting and beyond real. Your use of time was very interesting, and your incorporation of the vital flashbacks smooth.
I debated saying this, but I'll say it anyway: I envy your writing :)
You write with a finesse that is so . . . rich with both subtle metaphor and vivid imagery. It's simply captivating and I can't even begin to give you enough praise for what you managed to accomplish with less than four thousand words. Touya's amnesia and they way in which you presented his dreams and hazy memories was completely believable, while at the same time creating a mystifying atmosphere that made me just want to continue reading and reading and reading.
If I happen to be familiar with the fandom, you can believe that I will definitely be reading more of your work and reviewing when I have the chance. Please keep up the amazing work and thank you very much for sharing your writing talents.
| FF Reader chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Well, this was such a refreshing read. I really liked your characterizations especially with Touya. I also liked your style and would like to see more diverse genres in your writing. :)
| BoxPrince chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Haha great story love it amnesia can do weird things can't they?
I just want to share this poem with you it's ice and hopefully you can turn it into a story :)
Remember loved ones never leave they ar forever near.
For their love lives on in memories, our hearts hold dear.
| VioletCamellia chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
awesome!this is now on my fav stories list!
| aestheticisms chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
i'm an incoherent mess right now, this is absolutely gorgeous. ahhh, i'm in love. it's a been a very (very) long time since a fanfiction has made me feel just so utterly lost and hopeless and awed all at the same time, i think you've managed to light up that spark.
you have a gorgeous style, your writing is your own, and it's so lovely. as much as i would like to peg this as a romantic story, i find it to be more of a character study on touya, silly and brilliant touya. he's always given the shortstraw in most fics (mine included) so for him to rise up from the ashes in such a marvelous fashion was refreshing.
it was a pleasure to read, really. i'm off to read the rest of your works!
| madroxj chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
This reminds me of Memento a bit. Great story!