Reviews for Overload's cry
guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
You kind took part of the normal ending of disgaea with him becoming a prinny and all
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
WHAAAT!? Mao reincarnate to be a Prinny ?
Disgaea4everdood chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Not too shabby for a first story; but it needs some improvements. I don't mean to be rude but, there are many flaws in your fic. For example: there are many words in your story that are misspelled, secondly grammars are a bit broken, and lastly, some of the sentences doesn't make sense for example: ""Gaw!" Overlord dry in pain." it should've been "cry" in pain.

If you want to make a decent fanfic without having any hostile reviewers(not all reviewers in this site are that hostile just telling you that.) flaming you till no end, I'd recommend getting yourself a beta and fix your story.

Other than that, your story's pretty good, had some errors, but not too bad. You have potential, I hope I'll see more of your stories in the future.