|Reviews for The Light in the Dark|
| aquastar chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
ok i just took a look at the first chap and it looks...well...long...and its ...10:33pm and i will red it soon iread the frist few lines its good so far
| crystal crittenden chapter 10 . 10/12/2003
Really cool. I like this fic. Please, do another chapter or two?
| Cows go Moo chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
...there's something wrong with you.
| LightOfDarkness chapter 1 . 2/27/2003
This is interesting. I like it.
| Emma Forrest chapter 1 . 1/19/2003
I can tell this is incredibly well written. The description is great. However, I rarely watch Yu Gi Oh and so I don't have much to say. The whole thing didn't make much sense for that reason. Wonderful writing though!
| NC chapter 10 . 8/19/2002
o.o' Whoah. This is...heh. This is hard to put into words. _ Your story sucked me in, alright...and if your going to write others of this magnitude, do so! Do it if YOU want to, not to see what others think. o.o Frankly, if you do as well as you did on this one, it'll be great. (And I agree...psych CAN be fun...)
Ja ne for now!
-NC of the *Unholy Quintet*-
| Bernarde chapter 5 . 8/16/2002
*blink* i'm back again... damn, this is kewl...
| Bernarde chapter 4 . 8/15/2002
*yawn* ...damn... no, I'm not yawnin' at your story! I'm yawning cuz I'm tired. Dammit... It's 11:43 at night and I'm staring at a computer in an otherwise black room. I can barely see what the hell I'm typing... I'll finish this story tomorrow... hope you don't take any offense, VampireUnicorn... oh, btw, kewl name...
| Bernarde chapter 3 . 8/15/2002
I still love this ficcy... ok, let me get this thing straight... their's a dictarship, and their vampires... kewl. At first, this was kinda confusing, but now it's all falling into place. :) Seriously, this is the best story I've ever read on , and I'm puttin' dis on my fav's list...
| Bernarde chapter 2 . 8/15/2002
The Grim Reaper's a girl? Neat... what the hell is going to happen? Must... read... next... chapter...
| Bernarde chapter 1 . 8/15/2002
Damn... damn! You're an awesome writer, I swear it! Damn! I need to read the rest of this... it's 10:40, but I shall read on!
| Arrrgh Girl chapter 7 . 8/2/2002
Wow this is a great fic.
i mean i have loved vampires since i was five.
bakura is my favorite character. and i totally
agree with you about Pegasus
any way i was thinking about something if they
beat the Queen of Spades(QOS) take or leave it.
its your choice so here it is. they beat the(QOS)
and then there is darkness and Bakura not Fallen
yells wait and the scene is back at the place of
the wish and the reaper was like do you know how
hard it was to stop that spell and to put things
back in place in this world and that whole thing
was something he dreamed what might happen when
he heard the word wish Fallen asks him why and
bakura says quietly i need to think a lot longer
about my situation before i change it Fallen
could maybe try to literally knock some sense
into Bakura the reaper then whispers good
because Bakura's dream was actually a vision.
So they all just end up talking about the
So any way that was my thought you could twist
It to the way you want it but just ponder on it.
it may even help if you get writer's block near
the end or whatever
I hope you find your muse to help you contine
with this story.
Oh by the way I love your name VampireUnicorn
It is really awesome!
| Yoru Hana chapter 7 . 7/26/2002
*Blinks* Ohoooo... Space Balls flashback...
| Indigo Child chapter 7 . 7/25/2002
This story is so good ! You have to finish it !
Not only is Bakura my favotire person on Yu-Gi-Oh, but I've always liked Pegasus too. For some reason not many other people do..
Anyway, keep writing !
| You still know who I am right chapter 6 . 7/18/2002
I loved it! You got Pegasus perfectly
âœOh. So then, I donât think youâre pleased with my diet, either, are you? If you want, I do think I have some snack bars somewhere around the mansion. Oh well.â