Reviews for Inanimate pt2
pyscopyromaniac chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
Awesome part 2 of the story! The lemon was hot, and the feelings that you've put into the story are so relatable it's amazing! Great job!
echo2794 chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
Awww :( I hope they meet again, they're so perfect. I liked the assassins blade metaphor, it fit nicely, as well as Itachi's line at the end. I liked it all..
Also, I don't know if I ever mentioned it but I love the dialogue during the lemons, they make it all the more real and enjoyable. It's not very often people use dialogue well in lemons and you achieve that so, good job! Haha XD Very nice work, I loved this story.
loverofakatsuki chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
Beautifully written once again and hated that Itachi left.

But he did have a point...him and Hidan will meet again...hopefully to stay together this time ;)
itanejiluver chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
aw...itachi left poor hidan all alone :( I hope that if you choose to continue this, you have them meet and decide to stay together til the end :)
Deivid chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
i think eternity is a long time indeed, they will meet again.
you wrote this nicely. i love itachi-rides. XD hidan at the end there were itachi left- i felt sorry for the dude. of course it was his own fault for everything that happened three years ago and, and i dont know, i love the story line however little it is. its enough to make it interesting and to feel for the characters and to understand whats going on in their, or at least hidans, head. i really do think that in the given situation hidan was IN character. because hes not just a rude bastard. hes colourful and you got him worth reading in every story! thats what i think. loved this part just as much as the first one, well no i liked first one better because of the 'forced' thing but this was soooo good! itachi is just perfect this way. more of Inanimate please!
MelloMethallica chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
so good. The end was a bit sad i kinda felt for hidan. Cant wait for inanimate pt3
black55widow chapter 2 . 9/3/2012
I hope they meet up again also.
female-fool chapter 2 . 9/3/2012
Fuck!Thats like...the best love story ever!...Its overwhelming and burns the soul to the core!...
Makes u long for the power of the eternal love...And also brings tears to my eyes every time they separate(yeah im a bit of a crybaby)...
I want to read much more...
P. ur the fucking BEST out there!
omgno chapter 2 . 9/3/2012
Well damn, Itachi. That was just mean.

Oh, and damn, Meti, that was just hot. The foreplay, the riding (which I happen to love), and the goodbye... Absolutely amazing. I can't explain my love for these two, and this story.. I loved it all. Keep up the great work.
HatefulRodeo chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
This girl loved it! Another fabulously well written chapter. Is there more to come?
female-fool chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
*let u know what we think*? WE'RE NOT THINKING RIGHT NOW!
We want!And we want it now!
P.S. Its fucking wonderful and so intense!...
duhorcommonsense chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
you have done this pairing a lot: but you are still doing an amazing job!
Deivid chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
fuck yes! its so damn good. i love these series. they're so different here and i absolutely love it. the way you write hidan and itachi in this story is like-... something i haven't seen at all. this is like a whole different level.
the last line 'he knew he deserves none of this but he would take it nonetheless' that was powerful.
omgno chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Oh ho ho.. I have a little feeling that Itachi had been thinking about Hidan, too.. They are such stubborn creatures... stubborn, sexy creatures.. Lovely and divine... Unfff...

Anyways, its great, and I can't wait for more... Keep up the phenomenal work, it gets better every time.
echo2794 chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
awwwwwwwwwww I like this :) The way Itachi wasn't written so well it seemed very realistic. Like, I could see it clearly and sympathize with both of them. I love this whole series. It's very well written and interesting. You definitely make vampires and such seem as cool as they are meant to seem :) It's awesome! More, please? :P
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