Reviews for The Empty Forest
Blackbird71 chapter 1 . 2/27/2015
This is good. I like the idea that before houses existed, the house was a forest. But it is still just as empty, still just as menacing. It would be awesome if you continued this.
Ben-ADDICT Cumber-BABE chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
very good
JamesSim chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
I like the Lovecraftean feel to the story. Although I have to say, I have not read House of Leaves yet but intend to in the future. Very nice, light read. Keep up the good work
insanechayne chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
I would first like to commend you for writing the one and only House of Leaves fic on this site. Kudos to you, good sir. Secondly, wonderful job on the writing. This is actually quite an intriguing idea. Are you planning to continue this? I would certainly read it. I think you could go really far with it, too.
Edhla chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Disclaimer: not familiar with the fandom.

That said, this is a lovely piece, and it's a shame it isn't more widely read. You have a good sense of the rhythm of prose ("a pact made in blood") and how to structure a sentence for maximum impact. Your story-telling skills are top-notch, too, though sometimes the narrative does seem a little detached and the reader a little distant from these characters.

Still, as someone outside of the fandom, this was easy and enjoyable to read.

Some minor typo/SPAG issues, but I don't put them in my main reviews, PM if you want a rundown. Good work, though, really :)