|Reviews for AI|
| Louey06 chapter 1 . 3/31
This was great, i just love Tony beig all smart and BAMF Great job!
| Leya Anhaylla chapter 1 . 3/15
OH my God! That was so cool.
| Smile Black chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
:D go Tony!
| XxXMidnightxMoonlightXxX chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
I love this story! Tony's a BAMF and Hammer'a an idiot, but we already knew that. Yes, Justin, het the guy who built an arc reactor while held captive buy terrorists to build you an AI. Its seems very obvious what's gonna happen, but ever accused Hammer of being smart, so.
Also, can I correct your russian? Its my native language. The way Natasha speaks to Tony is respectful because she uses plural 'you' instead of singular. It should be: Ты не знаешь моего языка, это было бы в файлах Фюрия (the last word is Fury's name transliterated).
Or: Ты не говоришь на моём языке, это было бы в файлах Фюрия.h diffeeence is 'know' vs 'speak' the language.
| Not signed in chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
that was so cool
| BamBam chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
A short one and not as good as all your other stuff. The characterization dont seem to fit, especially clint is all worng...
But hey, whatever. Still like most of your other stuff ;)
I dont know anything about the russian references but the german ones are quite terrible.
"Gibt es jemanden in der Nähe?" would be more correct, but it just sounds wrong. Go with "Ist jemand in der Nähe?" which sounds more natural.
"Überschreiben der Laptop" is grammatically just wrong. Go with a simple "Laptop überschreiben". But either way the command as such is just strange i guess. At least if you consider the laptop blows/selfdestructs because of it...i dunnow. sounds stupid.
| Cacau1005 chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
I liked it. I love your fics where it's mainly Tony-centric. And AIs are really cool, specially Tony's.
Anyway, since I live in Brazil, I thought I should warn you that you wrote the portuguese wrong. If he was meaning to say "We are going to kill you" in the plural sense, than it should have been "Nós vamos matar vocês".
Hope to read more fics from you soon D.
| UnimatrixMuffin chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Haha, I speak German, Portuguese and French :P
It's "Senhor" not "Senor", that would be spanish xD
It's also "gibt es jemanden in der Nähe" or "ist jemand in der Nähe" which would sound better to me :D
I don't really know what you wanted to say with "Uberschreiben der Laptop" and I don't speak Russian xD
Okay, now that we're done with that, I LOVE the story, and the idea of Tony building an AI that lip reads German and Russian to escape :D
(asasasdjkas I need to learn Russian...)
Really enjoyed reading :)
Stay awesome! 3
| EllipsisObsessed chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
*laughs evilly* though I don't quite get why the commands were in another language... was the AI not capable of discerning who was giving an order so he picked languages the captors wouldn't know? Anywho good ficlet.
-Ellipsis aka ...
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Great threats, Tony! You should do more to people who tried to kidnapped you!
| CrazysRPeople2 chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
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| THEBATMANIMPOSTER chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
| SiniseSnakeEyes chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Great story but if I am allowed to I would like to ask you something; Your sentences: 'Gibt es jemand in der Nahe?' and 'Uberschreiben der Laptop' What were your original sentences? Because if you want to, I could give you the correct German sentences since I speak German. But anyway, I really like this story!
| Accidental Child chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Nice, I like it. You know, I've always had an image if Tony learning different languadges from Yinsen, so he knows what people are saying around him. He just strikes me as the type guy to realise that he doesn't know something, then fix it so he does know. Great work on the story! C:
| Wolfjackle chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I really like your all-powerful Tony Stark. He's such a fun character! So many things you can do with him! Thanks for writing. I've been reading a lot of your one-shots, even if I don't review all of them. Anyway, I appreciate the story, and look forward to reading more of what you've written.