Reviews for Universe
xxJustKatexx chapter 15 . 11/23/2012
This is great! I have really enjoyed reading this. I very much look forward to updates. Keep going this is quite a cute little interesting story. )
Jazzyprentiss42 chapter 8 . 10/10/2012
OMG
Guest chapter 8 . 10/6/2012
Yay an update! :) this is really great so far! Longer chapters would be awesome, but this is still great! Please update soon!
Juddysbuddy chapter 8 . 10/5/2012
Just to let you know, I'm enjoying your story. It's good
to see Tom and B'Elanna now. One question - why don't they
just check her DNA with a medical tricorder? Tom has the
training but any doctor could do it. Thanks for writing!
Guest chapter 7 . 9/29/2012
Yay an update, please update again soon! This is great!
PT mega fan chapter 5 . 9/25/2012
Oooooh, this is getting interesting! I've bookmarked this page and will be waiting for an update! :)
Reader chapter 5 . 9/18/2012
This is really interesting! I can't wait until its updated!
Guest chapter 5 . 9/17/2012
This is amazing! I love it so far! Please update soon! This is great! :D
Guest chapter 5 . 9/15/2012
This is really interesting! Please update soon! :)
Guest chapter 4 . 9/6/2012
I really like your story. I'm really curious as to why B'Elanna and Tom had to give their daughter away. Please continue :-)
Skyess chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Well written, looking forward to see how this story continues.
Alpha Flyer chapter 3 . 9/4/2012
Well written, and intriguing. Look forward to learning why there would be something that looks very much like a 19th century orphanage in the Federation, and how (and where) Miral and her parents could possibly have lost one another.
CrlkSeasons chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
This is an interesting premise with a promising start to the story. There seem to be a number of 'primitive' elements in this Miral's world, - canvas mattresses, candles lit with matches and glass windows. I am curious to see where you will take her in the story.