|Reviews for Living In His Shadow|
| ripper34 chapter 8 . 2/6/2015
| Therio chapter 8 . 11/4/2013
Very good story. I would have thought the protagonist would have been someone other than Malfoy though. I really liked how you dealt with James sexuality.
A couple of small criticisms. For some reason, every instance of the word "while" in a lot of, if not all the chapters, as been replaced with the word "why". It was a little disconcerting at first. Open a chapter, then do a search for the word why, and see what I mean. Also, when they entered the Chamber, a big deal was made about the missing fangs, but then was totally ignored for the rest of the story.
Just a couple of small things, but they did not take too much away from this very good story.
| Jamie Theobald chapter 8 . 8/15/2013
Awww that was a great story! I really loved it!
| Jamie Theobald chapter 7 . 8/15/2013
Super Harry! Lol its funny the whole time he already knew who was behind it! And i couldn't believe Malfoy was in on it!
| Jamie Theobald chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
So out of the Potter kids Lilys a Parselmouth? And obviously someone else in Hogwarts as there are fangs missing
| Jamie Theobald chapter 5 . 8/15/2013
I would still like to know what happened ti that snake Harry set free. Love the story so far
| Jamie Theobald chapter 4 . 8/15/2013
| Jamie Theobald chapter 3 . 8/15/2013
Wow that is a shocker! Keep up the good work!
| Jamie Theobald chapter 2 . 8/15/2013
Uhoh who's tunnel was that. good job so far
| Jamie Theobald chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
| StarsShineBrighterInTheDark chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
this pretty good, keep wrtiting!
| sjrodgers23 chapter 8 . 9/21/2012
nothing could be futher from the truth thanks