Reviews for WHAT SHOULD I DO?
Cantarella3261 chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
so cute!
Jam chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Its cute. Really cute.
Rewinsan chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
your first natsu/gray story but it's quiet good. I found it cute and enjoy to read. Keep writing! :D
darkhuntressxir chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
its cute story.. you need to tell who saying what in the dialogue , its a bit confusing..
Yaya-Suki chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Awwwwwwwwww too adorable just too adorable
ChizuGawa chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Great job Onee-chan. and for this story my advice is gave name to the one who speaking, so the reader will know who is the speaker. anyway great job Onee-chan! keep writing I can't wait for the next story.
sorry i'm so miss typo so forgive me.
sign
Chizu Gawa, your imoto.
Indh13 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
You're doing great with this story. It's cute, esp when Natsu confessed. Tho.. a small advice from me. Please tell the reader who speak the dialouge, like; "No! I'm not!" Gray shouted, blushing.
Sometimes it's okay if you just write the dialouge but if you do it too much like in this story, readers will be confused of 'who-says-what'
Erm.. can you get what I mean? I'm not a native English speaker and honestly I kinda find it hard to explain things '