|Reviews for The Element of Surprise|
| acct-delted chapter 6 . 9/5/2012
I love the ending here. Your Darcy voice is incredible, and that Tony bit was quite amusing.
| acct-delted chapter 5 . 9/5/2012
Those lines about Bruce and his martial arts are hilarious!
| Lady Jaye1 chapter 6 . 9/5/2012
Lol. Adored the whole fic, especially with the ending of the Hulk green taser gauntlet. I can just imagine the giggles and snorts while Tony is hooking her up to it. I'm sure Stark probably managed to record the shaking Fury's hand thing and the kiss as well.
| AvengerGal chapter 6 . 9/4/2012
Lol! I laughed so hard at the last paragraph. I am soooo favoritism this story.
| Everiel chapter 6 . 9/4/2012
Darcy Lewis now absolutely belongs in Marvel Canon as She Who Tased a Fury and Lived. Was it possible for her to get more fun? Apparently it only needed the small matter of a building collapse and a cybernetic replacement. And Bruce is so adorably human. Stark's walk-on parts are totally in character and inject even more chaos into the story. But it's moving chaos.
A blasted fun read!
| TinySprite chapter 6 . 9/4/2012
Holy crap for Darcy! At least she's able to look to the bright side of things and is making good progress with lightening up Bruce too.
How'd I know a taser would get worked in here somehow? Overall, awesome story! Think we could get a one-shot extension of the ending though? Pretty please?
| TinySprite chapter 5 . 9/4/2012
Holy crap! Why the cliffhanger?! Why?!
| TinySprite chapter 4 . 9/4/2012
The more I read of your Bruce, the more I think of a puppy. That isn't coincidence, is it?
| TinySprite chapter 3 . 9/4/2012
This is such a cute chapter! I love how Darcy and Bruce are interacting with each other!
| TinySprite chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
Another great chapter! I feel bad for anyone that gets into an argument with your Darcy. She'd have them in circles before they could figure it out.
Also, why do I now see Thor getting chased by a mob of angry cleaning staff?
| TinySprite chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Awesome opening chapter! I really like how you write Darcy and I can't wait to see how you write Bruce!
| Lady Jaye1 chapter 5 . 9/4/2012
Suspenseful! But I loved the semi "date that is not a date", the hostage situation, and Darcy keeping her cool. Plus...gotta love Tony not getting a picture of Bruce.
| Amy chapter 5 . 9/4/2012
Aw, Darcy got him to go out. Lol. Tony would bring a camera for the after accident, too bad Darcy beat him to it. Hah. She’s right, he’s a hermit most of the time. With reason, but still, this should be good for him. Even her bold statements pronouncing his hotness. *giggles* I love the idea of Avengers drinks. She’d so do that.
Oh jeeze. You’ve got to be kidding. Do they have the worst luck or what? Thugs w/Chitauri weapons, great. Darcy is so much smarter than they give her credit for tho, no only noticing details, but hatching a plan to help Bruce and by extension everyone else. Too bad that makes her a target - and not the best way to keep Bruce calm. Asgardian curses, heh, that’d be funny tho. Oh that’s just so sweet, in the middle of all this a comforting moment btwn them. Love it. Wait, he knows martial arts? What am I saying, of course he does. Go Bruce! He doesn’t have to be green to be a badass.
Good thing Darcy is working on freeing everyone while Hulk clears up, little shop, big green guy, not the best combo. And the big guy is capable of thought, he knows when to hold back and when to let lose. I bet Bruce would be shocked by that kind of control, but it’s happening more often isn’t it? Wait, he calls her name? Wow. And you are so mean, a cliff hanger! How could you? I know you’re not gonna kill her, but still. Lol. I feel like I had to stop in the middle of a really good book. I can’t wait to see what happens.
| Tenebrielle chapter 5 . 9/4/2012
I just found this story today and it is most excellent! I secretly adore Bruce/Darcy and you do it very well. You've got Darcy down; the writing style fits her perfectly. :)
| Everiel chapter 5 . 9/4/2012
WRITE FASTER! I have to know how this ends!