|Reviews for The Element of Surprise|
| Harm Marie chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
| Amy chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
Okay, this was gold. lol. I can so see Darcy being thrown by Bruce's files. *snicker* And how she's got his eating habits down (btw, adorable that he steals her mac n cheese lol), she's good at taking care of people without being obvious about it. She's also an awesome champion. I would PAY to see her tase Ross, the jerk. Hey, she's good at getting him to smile, she keeps it up she'll be right up there w/Tony. But who can't smile when Darcy is around?
Lmao! Speaking of, Tony better watch sneaking up on Darcy. "Has she had her shots." *rotfl* Bruce is gonna be okay I think. Tony and Darcy? yeah, those are friends that'll drag you kicking and screaming into living.
| Lady Jaye1 chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
Yep...you've gotten me hooked. I suppose that's not a bad thing, but I do adore your portrayal of Darcy and Bruce.
| superlative chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
Loving this so much, so far. I am waiting for the next chapter (rather impatiently)
| FlyingHampsterOfDoom chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
Oh my god I love this. Never stop writing. Never. I want to read your Darcy/Bruce for all of time, and sssshhhh, this isn't a five-and-one, it's a 100,000 word story. All pre-written and updated daily, of course.
| bequirk chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
Snicker-inducing. I love the way you write Darcy.
And Tony. He's just wonderful.
| Lady Jaye1 chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
...You're starting to turn me into a Darcy fan and making me like this ship.
| innocent-vessel chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
Loving this! Your writing has a real rhythm to it and I LOVE your Darcy voice. Also, as a history / classics nerd, I am loving Darcy's book smarts :) Can't wait for the update!
| Inactive-Account1276 chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
Yeessss! This is my otp and there's not enough good writing on them, glad I found this because it's good. And actually quite accurate to how things would work.
| Amy chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
lmao. Bruce just got hit by Hurricane Darcy. He'll learn to roll with it, after all, Tony is his pal. Haha. I just love mild mannered Bruce with perky, slightly random (okay, sometimes a lot random) Darcy. Makes me giggle. I can't wait to see what happens next. Good job.
| bequirk chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
This is hilarious. The line about looking like Pepper is one of the best ever. Seriously.
| Lady Jaye1 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Oh very nice. I like your characterization of Darcy here. People forget she's intelligent underneath the way she acts, which I suspect could be part of a defense barrier. After all...she went to school for political science, couldn't find a job, & now her current job involves being the "friend" and "lackey." That's gotta burn just a bit, even if she has no real ambition.
I'm looking forward to how you write Bruce.
| Rebel Energy chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
I love this pairing aswell now which is odd but meh it is funny and I love how people write them!
| Didi chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Well written- I enjoyed your narrative voice & direction of the chapter. I'd like to see some dialogue in later chapters though. Thanks for the fun read. ;)