Reviews for The Element of Surprise
acct-delted chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
This is hilarious. The line about looking like Pepper is one of the best ever. Seriously.
Lady Jaye1 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Oh very nice. I like your characterization of Darcy here. People forget she's intelligent underneath the way she acts, which I suspect could be part of a defense barrier. After all...she went to school for political science, couldn't find a job, & now her current job involves being the "friend" and "lackey." That's gotta burn just a bit, even if she has no real ambition.

I'm looking forward to how you write Bruce.
Rebel Energy chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
I love this pairing aswell now which is odd but meh it is funny and I love how people write them!
Didi chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Well written- I enjoyed your narrative voice & direction of the chapter. I'd like to see some dialogue in later chapters though. Thanks for the fun read. ;)
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