Reviews for Mine
KratosDrake chapter 1 . 5/30
Ooh, spoopy! Nice onsight on Gary, even if it is a little OOC. But killing Zoey didn't make much sense, as I suppose Dawn isn't lesbian. And hey, if you're really going for it, why not involve Ash, Brock, Angie, May, maybe even Johanna? Anyways, this was good, if only a bit repetitive.
Samurai538 chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Well at least Gary didn't kill Ash
kati406 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
OMG Gary is very obsessed with Dawn xD I thought that Gary would killed Dawn too xd, well that was creepy. Why he didnd killed Ash or Brook?
Anonymous chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
And then Dawn Killed Gary :3
The end!
mrs. la chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
So...I'm like...hmm, CavalierShipping sounds good right now...and I see this and I'm like "Hey! It's that chick that writes 'You Paired Me With Who?' Oh, I love her!" And I'm expecting it to be this fluffy hilarious story (not looking at the genre tag) and I'm like "...asdfghjkl."
So, well...haha...
-backs away slowly-
But it was surprisingly well written. Thank you—er, I think.
GreenPokeGuy chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Well then. That's very creepy... I mean, he even killed a GIRL that was close to her! :O

At least some ships that I don't like were eliminated. :)

As you said, I wouldn't expect Gary to be possessive of her, more the other away. This just makes it interesting.

Though, I wonder why not Ash and Brock? They travel with her. That's got to be suspicious... :D

Thank you for writing this! Definitely a dark twist, but it satisfies my horror wants until another chapter of WTTBM is uploaded. :)