|Reviews for Dr Doom & GloomARI SHORE 1of5|
| alynwa chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Wonderful screenplay! I thought Brad's friend came off a little too racist, but it fit kind of with what he was going through. Welcome to the fandom! It's good to have another writer around.
| L J Groundwater chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
There are some real genuine Alan/Denny moments in here. Nice to see. Glad to see another person writing in this fandom. Sorry it didn't work out the way you wanted it to!
Have a read of others, this is a friendly group!