Reviews for Bonds of Temptation
Btterflykiss69 chapter 10 . 3/30
More please
Snaperipper chapter 10 . 2/27
Please continue and complete this story. It is very well written so far.
amberee89 chapter 10 . 2/20
Sorry not a person to review for each chapter. I really like this fic so far I hope u will be writing more because I'm dying to know what's going to happen next. Please keep up the great work and look forward to hearing/reading more.
sjrodgers23 chapter 10 . 2/19
more please how will Molly take it that Hemione is pregnant?
cares 1970 chapter 10 . 2/10
I just finished what you have of the story and cannot wait to read the next chapter. I hope you are able to upload the next chapter soon you have me hooked. I just love how you are writing the story and if it was not a Severus story I would be voting for George and if Harry was not gay it would be him that would be my first choice for a husband. I love the Hermione Severus stories but do enjoy a very well written Harry Hermione story too. Hope you have a very good week and weekend
Linda chapter 11 . 2/6
Love the story and hope you update really soon.
SeverusSnape'sLove chapter 11 . 2/5
Brilliantly written. :) I do so love the Weasley twins. Wish Fred was still alive. :( Anyway, please update soon.
Sassyluv chapter 11 . 2/5
Hi i just found this story as it was being re-vamped as you put it. I wonder how regular your updates will be?
Update soon!
Sassyluv xxx
meg527 chapter 11 . 2/5
Thanks for the updated version. This story is wonderful!
mslm chapter 11 . 2/5
The rewrites are great and I am looking forward to new chapters! I love this story!
Raven Lockwood chapter 11 . 2/5
Well, went back and read all the chapters and, as a person with a degree in "Grammar Nazi" (more commonly known as "English/Writing Concentration" ) I'm delighted to say that the changes you've made quite nearly make this a perfect writing example. There are one or two little flaws, but nothing significant, and they wouldn't be worth rehashing the whole thing again. Hoping, now, to see some new bits to this story, which is pretty durned good. ;)
H20g1rl chapter 11 . 2/5
I love your re-write!
Please, please continue!
IfIQuitNowTheyWin chapter 11 . 2/5
I quite enjoyed this story. Please write some more!
Guest chapter 11 . 2/5
Wonderful story. More please.
LadySaphire chapter 11 . 2/5
LOVE it ...cannot wait for more!
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