Reviews for Iron Body & Shining Soul
Guest chapter 45 . 8/29
spirit king is not a curve ball its a really op thing that is only supposed to be used in life or death situations hence the breaking of a key. there wasnt even a reason for it. please stop.
LtSorrel chapter 69 . 8/10
I wasnt sure what id expected when i started reading this fic. Typically im very picky with my writing, but with this i was in love after the first chapter. The attention to detail and the characters personalities are practically spot on. I loved that tyou had your own arcs within the story, each weaving into the next practically seamlessly. I thuroughly enjoyed the humor between Gajeel and Levy, especially the chapters:a deadly war and girl talk. Its so important to have a break once amd a while from the serious stuff.
However i found the best part about this was how they had their own personal problems to overcome amd remain together. Levy with her fragility of body and self doubt of her talents and strength. Gajeel with his massive strength but fear of hurting the one he loved most. His lack of readimg skills was an added bonus, one i think drew them together all the more.
All in all this was a beautiful piece and i look forward to reading your other works!
P.s sorry aboit the giant review, i get a little passionate about good writng and with 69 chapters it was well deserved
Lady Orez chapter 39 . 1/1
Hi, I just wanted to say how much I like reading this story. You have created a nice balance of action story arcs and then the nice relationship fixed lull in-between. Having seen that you have loads of other stories looking forward to working my way through them. Also, totally love Gajeel's continual assurance of Levy confidence- really sweet
Guest chapter 62 . 12/19/2015
I actualy feel sorry for the dark mages they are just standing the watching this fight very akwardly and the the bing in the sex and the they just get hit by that a ruff 10 for them
Guest chapter 58 . 12/19/2015
What i thoght she would be pregnet - sits in corner wile mumbling disapointedly-
Guest chapter 57 . 12/19/2015
I think i know what she has if you know what i mean hint what would mira imagine
Guest chapter 52 . 12/19/2015
He should have listed to reedus
Guest chapter 46 . 12/18/2015
I love how he has a sixth sense for picking fights
Guest chapter 31 . 12/17/2015
I laffed so hard when he said she wouldn't be able to read them all and those libary stories sound pretty interesting i would like to read the story behind those
Guest chapter 29 . 12/17/2015
Oh my god she can fly im so jelouse -animatedly cries-
Guest chapter 25 . 12/17/2015
Levy you little badass
Guest chapter 5 . 12/16/2015
I loved that grey comment priceless
levy mcgarden chapter 3 . 11/6/2015
iiiimmm the kitten dragon slayer
BookQueen12321 chapter 5 . 8/29/2015
Oh my goodness this is literally THE BEST Gajeel and Levy story I've ever read! I've always loved them together and I've read like ever fanfic with them on this website. So when I say this is the best I'm so not joking! :)
greenwings33 chapter 69 . 6/17/2015
S-so good! I've had to brush up on reappearing characters, but everything is so well thought out - such good foreshadowing! I love it! 3
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