Reviews for The One Thing That I Can Hold
DAIrinchan chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
I think this writing style is interesting - it shows emotion in a unique way. The fic came out very arty. Seriously, it was good.
There was one thing that bothered me, though; the use of orbs instead of eyes doesn't really work that well. It kinda works with this story, because of the artiness, but if it were written in any other style it would be really awkward.
Overall, i loved the story. I think it was great work. Nice!
Shu-chan chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Awwwwww It sooooo cute! U've got an amazing talent! It was just so cute
Lord.Jenny chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
I really like this story, it has a lot of meaning in my opinion. Great job!
Chi Cheshire Neko chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
This is great! It brought tears to me eyes ToT The format you used to write this fit the story perfectly! And the story itself was adorable, cute and very original! *heartz* Good work :3