Reviews for Being Invisible
dinabar chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Nice angle from Zak's viewpoint and good description, you've created the mood really well. Loved the line about Harry's death stare, I can really see Zak being terrified of that.
tigpop chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Awwww! Poor Zak :( I want to give him a hug now! I liked him having a voice for a change :)