Reviews for Battle
tushkabeau chapter 1 . 10/20
love the ending!
Skye-Blue 101 chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
Ok, I really wish there was more to this story
RobLover21 chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
Such a lovely story. 3
Anne Celeste chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
I wish it ws a multi-chpter its a lovly the end it describes their filings n thir love in a swit way :-P XD :-) O:-) B-)
shyone33 chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
love it but i dont see the problem as they arent related, so frustrating
pauleen chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Beautiful. But i fear for them.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Wonderful. Whoever the author is, please continue once the contest is over.
BarbyBells chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
woow! just... amazing!
lovepotionsbrewer chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Very sweet. I love how you wrote about the attraction of the soul/minds beyond the physical. I hope you continue this after the contest. I'd love to find out what happens next.
Lelezinha chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
I loved it. Will have a sequel?
Dulcinea21bella chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Wow. Amazing!
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
wow...that is all consuming and terrible circumstances! i hope they do fight!
malleelee chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
The teaser of a beginning was such an easy relationship foundation. Living together as siblings presented a special set of circumstances avoided until communication made the situation clear to Bella and Edward. This is written skillfully to present the difficulty with slow, meaningful development. Enjoyed this story.
suzy 2010 chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
What a sad, but lovely story.
pipelynn chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Loved this! Great entry...would be so fun to see what happens next!
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